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"Merried with a Vampire chapter 1" by Dragomir Cristian Madalin

SF&F Picture 2 out of 3 by Dragomir Cristian Madalin

What happens when a preascendant being gets trapped in an engagement with a superior vampire with a taste for his blood? Well lots of funny situations that's what ;) This is my first try on the story of this weird couple :S ... Also don't bite my neck off because of the spelling mistake in the title :) thats just a hint to the story ;) Hope you enjoy my storry telling ;) or at least the spin off of it :) if you want a taste of my well true story telling then read 'The Soul Mate of a Demon Queen' found in my gallery ;)

Good bye and Hello!

“Are you sure that you want to live this dimension?”, said with a sad voice a 1.80 meters tall man with a long red hair tied in a pony tail.“Yes, I must go ... I have to find my light again ... otherwise the tragedy that has happened one hundred and two years ago might happen again ... and this time not even you will be able to stop me!”, said a young man around twenty years old with silver hair cut short that laid on the back of his head like a fan was blowing in his face.

The silver-haired man was around 1.90 meters tall, had piercing black eyes that would not stray from a kill, a supermodel like figure, that no women would resist and a strong body with perfect developed muscles suited for hand to hand combat and sword fighting. He wore a white coat with black borders, black pants and a white shirt with a pair of black swords on it. At his waist laid ready to be used to perfectly identical katana swords with a white handler and a black scabbard.

With no expression on his face he walked to the dimensional portal which was like floating watter with a lightning made border that distorted space and time in that region. Before entering he looked back again at the red haired man and said:

“Good by friend and take care. I'll miss you! O ya and don't you dare mess up my room cause I'm going to hunt you down to the ends of Hell when I get back! And ...”

“Don't worry! Even if it is just me I'll make sure the world is at peace and that I will never fall under the power's control and turn into a tyrant. I have my light here with me and some future ones on the road! O ya before you go, catch!”, he said throwing him a weird bracelet.

“What is this?”, said the silvered haired man looking at it.

“Put it on now, than press the red skull. It will absorb your cloths and weapons into a spacial void. You can only put in the cloths you are wearing now. I suggest you press that button into the changing room and go with some other cloths there. To restore your clothing just press the red skull again. The cloths will be absorbed and repaired in the void trough nanit technology.”

“You could of said that earlier ... geesh ... now i have to change ... Oh well ... be back in a flash.”

After a minute he came back with pair of plain clothes and walked into the portal, but before entering he turned around and departed with his friend trough a simple smile.

The moment he entered the dimensional gate, the gate itself vanished without a trace.

After 10 minutes the raid haired man let go of a pair of tears and said with a sad voice like he was about to cry:

“I can't believed he smiled after ... after 50 years since her death...even though our bodies are those of preascendents ... our souls and hearts are still human ... Twin Blade, my friend ... i bid you farewell and hope that you will find your light again and that you will never have to pass through the same pain again! Good by!”

As he passed through the dimensional gate he could see the worlds between them ... he could see the billions of universes inside a dimension and the thought that he might miss the one he is targeting sent a shrivel down his spine, trapping his heart in a block of ice for a second.

After two minutes inside the gate he could finally see the end of the tunnel and also ... the fact that he was one kilometer above ground:

“OH DAMN!!!WHY DIDN'T SOUL CARVER GAVE ME A PARACHUTE INSTEAD OF A BRACELET!!! GYAAAA!!! I SWEAR I'M GOING TO KILL THAT NO GOOD COPY SOUL OF MINE THAT OPENED THE STUPID GATE IN THE MIDDLE OF THE CLOUDS!!!Damn ... what to do ..., he said while falling in the thinker position ... GOT IT! Three ... Two ... One ... BLAST OFF!!!”

Aiming his hands at the ground and focusing energy in his palms he created two identical jets of energy that reduced his speed to almost half, but because of that he didn't saw the plane coming from his back ... and got splattered on it's wind shield just like a bug...but he fell down after that hitting the left wing and tail of the Boeing 747. The pilot a little shocked said to the one next to him:

“Did you see what i just saw? ...”

“I think this coffee is expired ... any normal human would be a stain of blood on the window of the Boeing, but what we saw just went splat on it like one of those cartoons from warner brothers ... “

“Yup ... i think the coffee is expired to ... anyway what do you think of that hot presenter from the eight o'clock show on channel five?”

Rubbing his head with his hand to ease the pain Twin Blade forgot about slowing down and started falling fast again...but this time there were just a few hundred meters:

“Owie ... why do I always have to hit something while falling from the sky, this is the twenty-third time I hit a Boeing...well last one went BOOM ... but it was still a hit ... ouch ... huh? ... OH DAMN I FORGOT THAT I WAS FALLING!!!”

Trying to fly using his arms like a bird he hit the ground in a nearby field creating a small crater, but because the Boeing gave him a lateral speed, he went scraping the ground towards a nearby road...eating at the same time the uncooked corn that was planted in the field ... well just the roots and dirt around them.

At the same time walking peacefully on the road was a young girl of around 18 years old with a long silver hair that reached her waist and a body and face that would make any women jealous and any man horny. She was wearing a short skirt a little above her knees and a summer shirt. From the looks you could say it was a uniform.

Coming from her left side, Twin Blade hit her at full force and sent themselves flying in the bushes of the forest on the other side of the road.

Though the hit could of easily have broken a human body, she was perfectly fine, excluding the small headache from the impact and her dirtied cloths, but Twin Blade on the other hand got a bleeding head, two broken ribs, a stomach full of dirt and corn roots and his clothes raged.

Opening her eyes he saw Twin Blade half conscious with his hand on his head and smelling his blood she felt a strong desire to drink it. The smell gave her a big ecstasy that unconsciously attracted her to him.

Half opening his eyes Twin Blade saw the beautiful girl coming crawling on four legs towards him in a sensual movement and with piercing beautiful and lustful blood red eyes. He also felt he was attracted to her in some way, like a spell, but he knew that his zardonium blades (zardonium is the most powerful form of mater like energy form that God ever created, it is believed to be the actual shell of the Universe and is more holy then holy water in a church with the Holy Grail all together in the same thing) would protect him from any kind of spells, but, then again they were inside the bracelet and the effect was somehow reduced a lot.

Crawling on to him and going up looking in his eyes she licked the blood on his forehead, then she slowly licked his blood to the neck and showing her teeth she bitten him and started to drink it.

Twin Blade wanted to resist but the will to not resist was bigger and let himself drown in the vampire's spell of love. At the same time when she drank his blood, the excitement and ecstasy that were released inside her were tremendous.

After the first drink she retracted her fangs and saw how the wounds she made started to regenerate, and after that she went to his mouth kissing him sensually and deeply like she was totally in love with him. This action made him lose his balance and made them selfs fall down, with him on top, but continuing kissing and hugging.

Meanwhile on the road a small race car was coming towards them with over 50 miles per hour and at her weal was a werewolf and next to him another one was drinking wine from a metal bottle.

“Hey Dude! The wine is gone ... Hic ...,” said the werewolf that just emptied the bottle.

“I can see that man ... wow ...,” said the werewolf that was driving.

“Eh ... Dude? What happened to the wine? ... hic ...”

“Dude! You drunk it all! AHAHAHA!”

“WoW ... I forgot ... hic ... and there she goes my bottle of wine! HIC!”, said the werewolf throwing the bottle in the air.

“Dude ... you might have seven years of bad luck if you break a metal bottle! …

“Eh? Dude no! That was if you walked on a ladder with salt on your shoulder while sneezing two times!”

“Ya ... wow ... dude! COOL! I hit a squirrel!”

“That ain't no squirrel! That's a moose!”

“Dude ... we're drunk!”

“Ya dude!”

When their high intelligent talk reached this point the bottle finally came down as the law of gravity commands: what goes up must come down hitting someone in the melon! And the bottle come down hitting Twin Blade in the head making him to easily bite the vampire girl's tongue and because of the small scare she did the same same with his tongue.

Half mesmerized by Twin Blade she thought after they bit their tongues:

‘Good thing i didn't say ...’ ... “contract ... complete ...”

“Contract complete...”said Twin Blade repeating her words with the little bit of consciousness left and falling on her afterwards.

She at the same time became unconscious falling asleep along side with Twin Blade. The moment they said "contract complete" a white light surrounded them and in the next moment it retract into two identical rings on each other’s fourth finger on their left arm.

The rings had above an emblem of a wing stabbed with a sword while a water symbol surrounded it.

←- The Soul Mate of a Demon Queen | Merried with a Vampire chapter 2 -→

Date	Name	Comment
6 Jul 2008	Dragomir Cristian Madalin	Loading... please excuse the spelling mistakes
13 Jul 2008	Lynn K Hollander	Loading... “I can see that man ... wow ...,” said the werewolf that was driving. Well, you did this one English style just fine. This one -- “What is this?”, said the silvered haired man looking at it. -- will be correct if you remove the comma -- "What is this?" said the silver haired man looking at it. You’re using the English style of paragraphing, which is to begin each paragraph on a new line and with an indentation. That looks good. Double spacing between paragraphs, as you do here, is customary in HTML. Are you writing the story first in your language and translating it, or are you writing in English? Dragomir Cristian Madalin replies: "i get annoyed when i try to do translations of my stories so i either do it in english or romanian this one was in english and not translated and thanks for the tips But besides the grammar mistakes and all what do you think about my writings so far? (and please tell me the truth even if it is harsh )"
13 Jul 2008	Lynn K Hollander	Loading... I find the action difficult to follow. If you assigned names -- or even just descriptions -- to actions or dialogue and put the actions or dialogue of separate characters in separate paragraphs, it might help. The section this is from is really confusing: ’... catch!” he said, throwing him a weird bracelet.’ The he and the him aren’t what might be called ’attached referents’; that means I can’t tell them apart. Red threw Silver a bracelet -- if that’s what happened -- is understandable; he threw him, not so much. I like more character, even at the expense of action. I miss logic. Everyone here seems to be acting randomly, without any initiating cause. Is there a backstory or a motive for what we see acted out here? Dragomir Cristian Madalin replies: "i left out their names intentionally and used only he and him as reference because of the effect on the story. Normally in the introduction of any story its described or named the characters, time and place of actions, in mine these things come step by step as the story progresses, their names are found out threw other means, like the red haired man for example. His name is later found out when the white haired man screams out when falling from the sky: "OH DAMN!!!WHY DIDN’T SOUL CARVER GAVE ME A PARACHUTE INSTEAD OF A BRACELET!!!" I find it more interesting, and also the main character must have a good mysterious feeling behind him like what race is he? what’s his REAL name? why is he in that situation? questions that are found out graduatly as the story progresses I find this thing having a better impact . (his ’name’ is revealed in the second chapter) This character is build on his actions, not on what the story teller (me) tells about him The characters aren’t typical or represent typologies like ones is the typology of the greedy man, the other of the mistress, the other of god know what do you understand? I also think is better to make the character look more real he has a personality like this and not a typology. I also want their actions to be shown as being done by fate or it happened because...no reason behind it...it just did this way the characters are pictured in different situation and the reader may not know exactly what will happen as the story progresses i don’t want to reader to know the end when the story started . If you read the other story in my gallery you will see what i’m talking about and please tell me if you actually figured out the end from the start or i just surprised you with the events . ps: are these two chapters that i wrote funny or not i mean did you get a few laughs or two from their situations or not? "
14 Jul 2008	Lynn K Hollander	Loading... ’...did you get a few laughs or two from their situations or not?’ -- No, I didn’t find anything amusing enough to laugh at. A situation isn’t funny without context, remember. A pratt fall -- where someone loses her footing and lands on her butt -- can be a tragedy if it leads to a broken hip, an annoyance if it happens to a gymnast in parctice and amusing if it happens amid other slapstick. The reader’s reaction will depend on context. Here, since ’... it happened because...no reason behind it...it just did...’ , there really is no context. Dragomir Cristian Madalin replies: "hm...it sure would be funny to see Twin Blade fall on his but and break his hip after falling about 2 km from the air, hitting a plane with a rather big force, then slamming the ground so hard that he litteraly eats the dirt and creates a crater =)) lol i can’t stop laughing after i imagined the situation =)) first thing you have to see is that if you take NORMAL humans and put them in the character’s places here then, ya it would be tragical , but these guys AREN’T human =)) it’s sci-fi mixed with fantasy =)) and thus it creates a comical situation instead of tragical ones "
14 Jul 2008	Lynn K Hollander	Loading... (part two) One of the aspects that makes a situation funny is a disappointment or a disruption in expectation or purpose. In the Road Runner/Coyote cartoons our amusement stems from Coyote’s continual failures. He never succeeds in catching Road Runner. (We also expect gravity to be a constant, which expectation is occasionaly violated.) However, here I have no expectations -- and no, I have no idea where this story is going -- and your characters seem to have no purpose. They’re not doing anything, things just happen to them; they go on, and something else happens to them. They seem to be pushed around by Brownian Motion, like dust motes, and I find it impossible to care about them. So is this a parody of a Road Runner cartoon, where arbitrary events occur for an arbitrary length of time, and then everything stops? Dragomir Cristian Madalin replies: "lets see the purpose is explained in the second chapter and it’s the same as in the original and that is "finding one’s light" thing which at the start of the story will be a vague idea and that will get hints and explications during the story . The difference between this parody and my original work is that in this one the meeting of the characters and their personalities tend more to a child like behavior while in the original they maintain a high note of maturity and gravity of situations . Let see the comic in this parady is the comic of situation and speech i for one still laugh when i reread this and similar stories to this one i laugh at both some grammar mistakes and the actual images and actions i depict in these stories . By the look at your comment i kind get the idea that you didn’t read the second chapter oh well ... The actions that happen to them are triggered by actions that took place in the past a chain reaction , though is very hard to see . Also the actions that take place are just to create the characters, teach them something, or simply show some abilities com on the guy get hit in the noggin with a METAL bottle and doesn’t die just get a funny face from the bump and a passionate kiss with the vamp now this is funny also the speech of the 2 werewolf is funny the actions that the vamp have upon sensing his blood and the reactions of Twin Blade to her reactions those are classical My comic is a more simple minded one i see you have a taste probably for more complex comical situations which require some brain power to understand unlike mine My characters, their backgrounds, relationships, purposes are built during the entire book so you won’t get the hole purpose or char just from the first 2 chapters Also i tend to give all my chars the ability of immortality which tends to endless situations "
11 Aug 2008	ANGEL/DEMON	Loading... YOUR STORY IS AWSOME..it’s...it’s so real can imagin it all!> it’s like anime!