| 8 Oct 1999 | Heini Hätinen | Loading...the body prportion is..well...wrong. like the arm for example. more observation needed.
the face is nice,tho. so, fix the arm and.. well the arms are too big anyway. and the hands..
i'm not being mean or anything.. just trying to point out where you did wrong, so you can do better next time.
try drawing some magazine pictures through a semi transparent paper. it could help | |
| 9 Oct 1999 | The Artist | Loading...Arr. Yes. You are right. Since I didn't get her whole body in the picture (much of her legs got cut off) she looks even worse. Heh. And I really suck at hands. I'm workin' on it though. ^_^ | |
| 13 Oct 1999 | Colin L. Martel | Loading...Hey, don't say that, your hands are fine! The only clear flaw I find to this one is the lenght of the upper left arm... | |
| 2 Nov 1999 | Sylvie Jackson | Loading...Her hair and face are AWESOME! Good job on the costume as well, and the fire is very well drawn... It's hard to do flames with pencil! hehe Her body does need some work though... My advice is to use a pose from a catalog like Sears or JC Penny | |
| 4 Nov 1999 | Laura Freeman | Loading...As with the above comments, her hair and face are very lovely...although her expression makes her almost wary of her power (but that's ok...I understand if she feels that way!  ), but her body proportions are rather off. But you've heard that, and you know. I love the Japanese culture, so it's nice to see some of it represented! | |
| 17 Feb 2000 | | Loading...i love that kimono! i love it! | |
| 27 Feb 2000 | Claire Johnson | Loading...I love it. The hair is yet again (I am going backwards in your gallery) very very well drawn. The arms are a little strange but you did a perdy good job on the hands despite what you say. How did you do that flame effect? Its really cool. She is a little too skinny, but maybe you were trying for that? Well, good job besides. | |
| 14 Oct 2001 | Lorian Half-Elven | Loading...very nice, like they said before the left arm needs to be a little shorter but you did very good, and on the body too. I personaly like the fact that she is a mage, gives it a good effect!!  | |