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"Corianne Meets Moose" by Gwenivere Stephan

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Hehehe. This is a very short story about my favorite Gemstone IV rp character, Corianne! She is super insane and is pretty well known for carrying around a dead mouse (and more recently, a dead duck, too!) She doesn't realize that he is dead and she loves him very much. This is the short story about how she met Moose and began her life as an adventurer!
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Corianne Meets Moose

Ivastaen 28th, 5105

It was a beautiful spring day in Elanthia. The first true day of spring for the year. Sometimes spring pretends to come, but there’s always a touch more winter just around the corner that pops up instead, just after you’ve put your winter gear away.
In a little house in a small forest, it was the first day of cleaning. The house smelled musty and it felt cramped after the winter and now it was time to air it out. It was a little Forest Gnome house and living inside of it were seven little gnomes. Five of the gnomes had brown hair. The other two had red hair.
One of the little redheaded gnomes did not enjoy cleaning day. Or, that is to say, she loathed it. She would have preferred to be out in the sunshine and sweet wind. So, as soon as she could, she slipped out of the house and into the beautiful forest.
It seemed to her that every tree had decided, in the night, to put out its pretty green leaves all at once. She wandered through the forest, looking up and down and around as fast as she could. She watched butterflies twirling around pretty yellow flowers and she examined the wide green leaves of the ferns around her.
If she had not been looking so closely at everything, perhaps she would not have noticed the dark lump on the ground to her left. It was very huddled and lay in a patch of dark leaves leftover from last autumn. She stopped in her tracks and dashed behind a tree, her heart beating very quickly and a slow grin spreading across her face.
She peered around the tree and squinted at the dark lump. Then, with an excited squeal, she sprang forward and caught it up in her hands. Then she sneezed, because the little lump smelled pretty awful. Examining it, she smiled again. She had been right.
It was a mouse.
"Oh!" she told it, looking into its small little eyes. "I have always wanted a little mouse pet! Won’t yous be my friend?" The mouse looked at her, the flopped a little and was looking blankly up at the sky.
The redheaded gnome squealed and hugged it to her chest. "Oh, goodie!" She turned and ran as quickly as her short legs could carry her back to her house. She burst through her front door without even thinking about her absence during cleaning day. She was hopping from leg to leg and clutching her new friend close.
"Corianne!" shrieked her mother, appearing from a pile of bedclothes that she had been trying to fold. "Where have you been?"
"Oh, Mother!" Corianne shouted, holding her new mouse friend out for everyone to see. Her sisters shrieked and jumped back, her father began to laugh, and her mother paled.
"Corianne! You throw that thing outside this instance!" her mother snapped.
"But, Mother! He’s my friend! I’ve always wanted a pet mouse…" Corianne looked down at her mouse with love in her eyes.
"But, it’s… it’s…" her mother was flailing her arms up and down.
"He’s my friend! Yous can’t make me get rid of him!" Cori shouted. She scowled and hugged him closer to her.
"Get out! You get rid of that thing or else, Corianne!" her mother was saying. Cori hardly heard her, though, because she was leaving.
"Don’t worry, friend," she told her mouse as she fled the house. She did not pause or look back. She could not hear her mother shouting at her in the distance or her father’s roaring laugh.
It was beginning to get dark before she stopped. She looked around, confused. She was not in her forest, although she was in a forest. It was darker and larger than she own was. She shivered, a little afraid.
"Well, friend," she said, "I guess we’s adventurers now." Then she sat down and rested from her long run.
"We’ll have to give yous a nice name," she said. She set him on her knees and stared at him for a long time. She shook her head over and over. "Do yous like the name Kitty?" she asked him. He just stared at her scornfully. She sighed and leaned against the tree at her back. Slowly, she drifted off to sleep.

When she awoke, she knew two things. Firstly, that she was very hungry, and secondly, that her new mouse friend’s name would be Moose.
"What do yous think of the name Moose?" she asked him as she got up and stretched. He looked up at her skeptically. "No! It’s not a silly name! It’s dignified. And it’s interesting, so peoples will remember it!" The mouse decided that it was all right, if she liked it, which she did.
"All right, Moose! Let’s go hunting so we can gets some skins to sell for money so we can eat! We’re adventurers now, we’s gots to take care of ourselves!"

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8 Jul 2008:-) Diane (Grandamelf) Reed
Oh this is so cute! You have got to continue!1

:-) Gwenivere Stephan replies: "1 I do plan on continuing! I am glad you think it’s cute, that’s great! Thanks!"
23 Jul 2008:-) Kelsey Lynn Reed
"The mouse looked at her, the flopped a little and was looking blankly up at the sky." hmm, could just be me but that sentence doesn’t make sense to me. Also, ""Corianne! You throw that thing outside this instance!" her mother snapped." i believe ’instance’ should be instant. Just those quick edits. Otherwise I think it’s a great short story and very original. Very well done ^_^

:-) Gwenivere Stephan replies: "For that first bit -- well, the word "the" after the comma should be "then." Also, Cori thinks the mouse is alive and it "talks" to her. 14
Second part -- AACH! I can’t believe I did that! That’s so funny - I always say it "instance" even though I know it’s "instant" and I didn’t even notice! Yeah, I’ll be going back and fixing that today!
Overall, thanks or the nice comment! I am glad for some things to work on because I’m a taaad bit stuck on the next part 14"
23 Jul 2008:-) Meelis Brikker
That´s one cute story indeed 1

:-) Gwenivere Stephan replies: "Gracias! Cute and entertaining is what I’m going for"
13 Jan 2009:-) Kelsey M. Graham
O.o I’m not sure if I should be mildly creeped out or laugh hysterically. I wonder what she’ll do when the mouse starts decomposing?
And ’Moose’ is an awesome name for a mouse.

:-) Gwenivere Stephan replies: "Hahaha. Moose doesn’t decompose, really, but he does ooze slime when you hug him... (gross) Cori just ignores it 12
Thanks for the comment!"
15 Jan 2009:-) Kelsey M. Graham
Maybe she should find a taxidermist...

1 Gwenivere Stephan replies: "Haha!"
12 Jul 2009:-) Jake Diebolt
A touch more winter around the corner...don’t I know it.

Corianne reminds me of Terry Prathett’s Duck Man. People would think he was perfectly sane, except he had a duck on his head, and when asked about the duck, he would say "What duck?"

Such are the throes of a tormented mind. But I digress!

PS that is the strangest way to become an adventurer. Shame on her parents, though! SHAME!


:-) Gwenivere Stephan replies: "Hahaha that’s amazing, and does indeed sound like something Cori would do.
Thanks for reading!"
23 Jul 2009:-) Jirah Reckinger
awww!!! mousey!!!

:-) Gwenivere Stephan replies: "Hehe. 2"
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About 'Corianne Meets Moose':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Gwenivere Stephan
 • Copyright: ©Gwenivere Stephan. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Gemstone, Four, Roleplay, Corianne, Moose
 • Categories: Humourous or Cute Things, Dwarf, Dwarves
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