Your stories are FABULOUS! The narrative is well-paced, with just the right amount of description and excellent timing, and your plots are fascinating. I love the unconventional approach you take with plots- it adds a great deal! You have a few awkward sentences, but that's just piddling editing details. I loved reading your stories, and hope that you post some more soon!

Great writing, great ideas. Now, if you could only get some more stories on here! *Grin* Hey, I am impressed! I was lucky to discover this...

just wanted to encourage you to post some more stuff! i read both your works and found them marvelous. i hope to see more of your stuff soon...

What do you mean, you don't right good stories? If I had half your talent... *grumblegrumble* Anyhoo, great stuff, and I like "Night Sounds!"

Hi im Aeneldor the shattered mage...anyway I suppose you want to know what this is about, well have some patience an old man is slow to speak at times but you simply must listen more carefully...ah but there I go on a Rambling Rampage eh? So I simply would ask of you a look at my page I have many stories and am working on many more in fact I am currently working on a book...The Dragonshield...and a more heartfelt story called The Falcon's Blue Eye which I hope to have comepleted in a short time. So if you like...check it out...thank you
http://elfwood.lysator.liu.se/libr/j/a/jameson/jameson.html

Wow, this is a really great library... I so much love your work. There are some cool unque ideas. As I think some one above's said, you do a very well paced narrative!! I look forward to seeing more of your work!! I'd be grateful if you let me know if/when you update?

These are really well done stories. Each little nuance has its own strength and contributes to make your work some of the best I've seen in a long time. I really think you have something special here, unquestionable talent. I really hope you write more, this is really high quality. Keep up the excellent work.

Melanie E. Haley replies: "Hi everyone! I just wanted to say thanks for the comments. I'm doing my best to have at least one new story for you by the end of December. Wish me luck!"