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Kate ´The Pirate´ Riley

"Alsace Lorenne" by Kate ´The Pirate´ Riley

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Love seems to be the theme to these poems 'o' mine. This is only the second succesful one so far that my brain has bestowed upon me so it won't amount to much then ha ha! Ho ho. I was listening to 'All the things she said' when I got the idea for this one and savage garden truly madly deeply topped it off. This is about two cursed lesbians and no it's not as sordid as it sounds lol Much better than Just Children (I hope) Bit of a rest from my Omega and Kiah this one for me as well. I'll explain the whole story behind this poem at the end so that you can try and figure it out first. No cheating! (yet I know you will you crafty things you...)
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Alsace Lorenné

 

‘ Touch me. Right here…beyond all being, like you did long ago.

I know it’s too late, doesn’t stop me wishing.

Hope is eternal, sweet Lorenné,

And so are we…’

 

 

Hope…where did you go? Why did you leave me?

I lie here at your feet, rain falls down: How it always will be,

That I’m forever asleep in a nightmare, all alone, the battle in my heart,

Truth that I can never wake, always alive, eyes wide open, a living, breathing part,

Of the statue standing tall in Alsace, with the pale and frozen heart.

 

Why? Why do only my dreams take me home? Streetlights strike up the way,

A gateway to a modern world, where the past there treads, then fades away,

Back to fair Avris Rue, I dream awake, where the child I was once danced,

Alive and sweet sixteen and new, who foolishly from bed to bed pranced,

A cruel girl, who broke the heart, of the only lover who ever proposed in advance.

 

Many a man my lips did meet, the very image of a common back street whore,

An upper-class child who lied about her age, chose to break in the boy next door,

He swore to cherish the girl I was, before she used him, the Virgin Bewitched,

I bedded him, without regret, taunted him after, too late, his favour switched,

When so coldly I took the virginity of a warlock, the child of a vengeful, scornful witch.

 

My blood grows colder, each time I remember the day Fate burst through the door,

Took me by the throat, her son in tow, the body of the doorman on the floor,

My heart turned to dust, with the swift chain of words, powerful and ever painfully true,

‘This girl must pay, for what she has done, may the heartache caused echo through,

Immortal pain, until true love she finds, there shall life end, with a saviour cold and blue!’

 

My life she took, eternity she gave, for a multitude of horrible mistakes,

So on I lived, like this was all a hideous dream, the murder was ‘suicide’ faked,

I did not wonder why I no longer grew, as years passed by, until a score of ten,

I was never believed, so I began to forget, live life as I had before then,

One thing changed, my appetite was lost, and I never passively touched another man again.

 

Love seemed a fallacy, my first never happened, until at a party, at a great house in Alsace,

A girl whose eyes were hidden behind a mask, with ruby red lips and a porcelain face,

Befriended me, took my hand, made me whole, whose green eyes sparkled, at a truth untold,

We both were different, a scorned upon pair, she for her looks, I for sins of old,

She never loved either, her many admirers, her heart too had grown lonely and cold.

 

Why, Lorenné? Why did you seek me out? You knew what I was,

You told me that night, beneath the stars, you could see my loss,

Why is it I allowed myself, to run with you out into the square, laughing, holding hands,

For a taste of the sunlight, you gave back to me, with a kiss soft as sand,

Blew away, washed over me, tossed aside our masks, roses spilling from you arms,

The petals touched beneath my chin, I sunk helplessly caressed by your charms,

Your long fair hair, against my skin, your scent sweet as honey, touched me with soft palms.

 

A love was forged, forbidden and beautiful, danced in the snow, reaching to heaven,

Both of us, letting go of the roses you held, letting them go, from one to seven,

The petals whirling softly in the wind, the sound of your heels, the swish of you dress,

The moment it ended, with those words, you stood still, as the world would know you best,

Arms outstretched, eyes laughing, glacial tears of snow and fallen roses at the hem of that dress.

 

Your words echoed off the streets of Alsace, even when I cried out, saw you in glass,

Unbreakable forever, always there reaching, for the love that came and went so fast,

One moment of madness, you dared to love me, and paid the terrible price,

A statue of everlasting bliss, frozen always, with one fateful roll of the dice,

A gamble I never wanted to take, an innocent sacrifice.

 

Lorenné…where did you go? Are you here with me tonight?

Or are you, I hope, amongst the stars, you reach for, are you with the light?

I love you, Lorenné, is all it takes, I see it clear as day,

All I needed was to say it, for the sun to return to me, forever come what may,

I pray for love and life and us, and above all my judgement day…

 

 

‘I’m…cold. I can see the stars!

All it takes, this one last breath to give to you…

Au revoir, my sweet, until we meet again…

J’eteme, ma chere, Alsace Lorenné.’

 

 

 

(Translations for my lovely moderator friends *wink* oh and for all you beautiful people too…

Au revoir….french for goodbye

J’eteme, ma chere….I love you my dear

Alsace Lorrene…the name of the frozen statue in Alsace

 So sorry for spoiling the mood with this but kinda needed it to be posted!)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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21 Nov 200345 Travis 'Costume' Kirby
Hey... I thought I would check and see if you had another update on Omega... but no you had this... so I read and wow... great imagery, and wording... I hope you put up some more poems and more Omega...

12 Kate 'The Pirate' Riley replies: "Thank you omega will return the very second I get the chance to (again) edit out Chaz's swearing. There's some stuff with a glove that becomes attached...complicated as usual xx"
30 Nov 2003:-) Kate 'The Pirate' Riley
Shhhhiiii----. I'm studying French A level yet I manage to spell Je t'aime wrong. grrr....
30 Nov 2003:-) Beth 'Fork Master' Lewis
Oh wow, beautiful and emotional! Deeply moving, with beautiful imagery! (After I saw the description at the top, I decided to listen to 'Truly Madly Deeply' at the same time I read the poem. It really did embellish it!)

You're a very good poet, you know? And it's good to see something that doesn't rhyme all the time. Not that I don't like rhyming, because I do, but change is good!

Beautiful work, I love it!

2 Kate 'The Pirate' Riley replies: "Thanks this is actually my favourite poem here. It was originally going to be a short story as was Just Children but I couldn't be bothered. Good move eh? Wow you've been busy today....much appreciated xx"
4 Dec 2003:-) Kaykamisch2
This is just beautiful, and it sounds so old. It's written like something from the 1700-1800's...I'm sure you know the time I mean. Very sad and romantic, and just, well...beautiful. Nice job here Kate! -K

1 Kate 'The Pirate' Riley replies: "Thanks! Yes I do know what you mean and I'm flattered xx"
24 Jan 2004:-) Chelsea Castonguay
so romantic!! *sigh* I enjoyed this very much!

1 Kate 'The Pirate' Riley replies: "Thank you!I enjoyed writing it! x"
25 Feb 200445 John Bagwell
This is amazing!!
You said that I'm good in creating mood in my poems, but you're great at it!!

1 Kate 'The Pirate' Riley replies: "Thanx hun, glad to hear so many people like this. Great response! heh heh x"
1 May 200445 Alison A. McCartan
Nice!!!!!!!!! Quite brilliant, actually. I really really really like this absolutely spiffing poem. Yes, doesn't French spelling bite? J'etudie le francais aussi, pour le deuxieme annee. Si tu veux visite a moi, j'ai ecrit un histoire de Cendrellion, qui est une espionne. Hope you could read that, and please pardon my lack of accents. Au revoir, mademoiselle!

2 Kate 'The Pirate' Riley replies: "hmm... you study france also and if I would like to visit your page you write the history of cinderella who is spanish...actually that doesn't make much sense now does it lol. I'll have to go and see....thank you xx"
19 May 2004:-) Suzannah Carrick
Ooo this is very amazing.

2 Kate 'The Pirate' Riley replies: "thank you very much!"
8 Aug 200445 Caitlin 'Cera' McLellan
Oh my....now this is true talent in the woods. It was captivating, delicate, sensual and meaningful, and I enjoyed every word. A wonderful, wonderful wonderful poem.

:-) Kate 'The Pirate' Riley replies: "whoa thank u very encouraging!"
2 Jun 200545 Chelsea doop
my... I'm left speechless... very wonderful. you truly have a gift. it was eloquent and had quite a melancholy air that made it sound worthy of Christina Rossetti(my favorite poet) who had a knack for writing sad and mournful poetry. yet it had all the things that i look forward to when reading poetry such as this; love, loss, sensuality, and...well i couldn't begin to finish it. a beautiful piece. truly.
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About 'Alsace Lorenne':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Kate ´The Pirate´ Riley
 • Copyright: ©Kate ´The Pirate´ Riley. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Girl, Witch, Curse, Glass, Love, Kiss
 • Categories: Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc., Romance, Emotion, Love
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