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Kate ´The Pirate´ Riley

"Just Children...." by Kate ´The Pirate´ Riley

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The first ever poem thats actually workied! An ill fated Vampire comes face to face with the love of his life. Quite a long poem with admittadly a lot of work to be done but hey this is my first proper poem so be easy on me lol! oh and watch out for the twist in the end....
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Just Children…

 

Once upon a fairytale, there was a city full of light,

Where the shadows gathered, around the heels, of those who longed for life,

Immortal sin slept, rough by day, no more alive at night,

The frozen heart split at the seams, by poor misguided plight.

 

A man there sat, alone each night, in a seedy back street bar,

Cloaked in darkness, in the corner, with beautiful emerald eyes,

By the light of a single candle, afraid of day, watching from afar,

Year after year, people he longed for, passing by this kind soul in disguise.

 

He gave them names, and listened to the tales they had to tell,

Of work and love and life that he was sure he’d never know,

For the love of mystery, he’d given his soul and fell,

One foggy, dizzy December night whilst struggling in the snow.

 

The kiss, the last kiss, was one of darkness, bound to blood,

Given by one as lonely as he, he found his life was prey,

For two hundred years and a day, he’d hidden in shame beneath his hood,

Stealing his wealth from hospital chambers, to survive the day.

 

God had left him, he was sure, to rot and decay forever,

Until a change to Fridays act, came unannounced and ditsy,

Strumming a song, of those who should always be together,

A mere slip of a girl, barely present in the room, with guitar and ditty.

 

At first, she could have been anyone, with her mangled jeans and spurred shoes,

But as she sang, looked up, he fell in love, without the slightest care,

With the Bohemian with striking blue eyes, skin of the palest hue,

Who wore the light in delicate flame, his spirit lifted high into forgotten air.

 

He watched as always, dared to dream,

Of what it would be like, to kiss, a mortal such as she,

Of how different it could have, should have been,

If only he could remain a man, when they did, and not a hungry beast.

 

She watched him, with a gentle smile, waved with a flick of her wrist,

Then before he knew it, they were dancing, floating almost in peace,

Didn’t see the people staring, at the two above the dance floor mist,

These two who knew much better now, that their love must soon cease.

 

They sensed each other’s every secret, laughed it off in the rain,

When the Holy Spirit, touched his skin, it burnt and seared right through,

She who had come to perform this task, one last trial, to numb her sweetheart’s pain,

The night the Angel came to bless, the down trodden, the damned too.

 

The moon blazed, the sun over the horizon peeping,

She pulled him near, her tears like holy water, burning,

These two old souls, closed their eyes, and learnt to kiss while weeping,

Wrapped their arms around each other, closer to satisfy their yearning.

 

There was a sudden bright; their lips touched, white light everywhere,

Then lost Daniel fell into the arms of an angel, her wings around them both,

The love they knew could never die, she said, would be strongest anywhere,

A touch, a blessing, a kindly spirit, gave him back his soul to betroth.

 

And there he stood, in raging sunlight, his eyes now striking blue,

As they had been years ago, but at such a price,

He now stood and stared, she was gone, and feathers all around blew,

He was mortal but now his pain had been multiplied thrice…

 

Years later, an old man sleeps, soundly the room filled with everyone he loves,

Slips away, happy and not alone, to rest at long, long last,

Returns the child he’d always been, to heaven up above,

Ferried safe to God’s Gates, by a figure from the past.

 

If not for the girl, he failed to know, the girl from 1928,

She with shaggy long brown hair, the first love he really ever knew,

Died of plague, returned to see, the man who always seemed to wait,

Sweet Ellie at the bar that night, gave him this, her one last miracle,

To see him alive, to remind us all, that love will always conquer all,

No matter who you are, those we loved never ever forget,

How to comfort, love us still, to pick us up when we fall.

 

Her miracle was one of love, a miracle that we all possess,

His only crime was to forget, to let it go, stay at unrest,

Heaven does not wait, for those who forever stress,

It smiles with those who don’t forget life, or live waiting for death,

This is a lesson for us all, we are as one, all of us,

Just Children.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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31 Dec 200345 No sfarartoos today
No soy fella. Mean love, caring, make undead more dead, an' pome most good special for first go, seen?

2 Kate 'The Pirate' Riley replies: "wow...um... thanx! You're very kind and when I say 'fella' I mean that as just something I say to ppl. Sorry for any confusion caused *walks away bemused* xx"
12 Mar 200445 John Bagwell
Very good stuff. There are a few mistakes, but you didn't mention some that I did, and this is a first go, so I'll not mention them.
This is good!
(Sorry if I was bugging you about your updates before,I'd just read the sacred and wanted more. MORE!!) sorry 'bout that.

8 Kate 'The Pirate' Riley replies: "Hmph well the next bit of the Sacred was rejected (oh poo) apparently because it was a little too gory or something (rubbish!). well if you've read Mr Kirby's comment by now, then you will know that I have a lot of work to catch up on (although a few poems might just do the trick instead heh heh). Damn me and my big silent mouth!"
19 Mar 2004:-) James Tsatsaronis
Maybe one day I'll make good poetry but until that day comes I'll worship those that can, so congrads you just became a god

22 Kate 'The Pirate' Riley replies: "....Okay! Thank You! *takes a bow* x"
5 May 2004:-) Cheyenne Kai
Yep I got goosebumps too. Not sure whether it's because of the English weather. grrrr.....or the poem. The beginning sounded so much like a fairytale. The rythem was very smooth. and a joy to read. I liked it very much. Will have to read it again. *smiles*

12 Kate 'The Pirate' Riley replies: "Thank you very much! Encouraging! I rather like this one myself although I haven't written much like it since Alsace Lorrene...that will have to change! Thanks for visiting xx"
19 May 2004:-) Karin Schadinger
hmmm.. the story you tell is really good! ^^ But I need say, it was really hard for me to follow the plot...

12 Kate 'The Pirate' Riley replies: "Thank you! *bows* Unfortunately I have a habit of losing myself in these things so it's inevitable until I get some sort of universally friendly initiative lol. Hmm...glad you said that actually as I was wondering if people had really understood this or just read my description thanks again 12 x"
22 Jun 2004:-) Makenzi I. Crouch
This is very...moving isn't the right word, because it's not, but I don't want to use lovely, either. It's very...very... ARG! I can't think of a word! It's very good, but that's not exactly what I want to say. I mean, it is, but it's more than good, it's...it's...MRARG!!

And go pirates, by the way. *grins*

22 Kate 'The Pirate' Riley replies: "*mouth forms a silent 'O'* thanks...I think lol!"
18 Jul 2004:-) A. Artemis Heart
This is really good especially since you said it was your first poem that worked.

:-) Kate 'The Pirate' Riley replies: "thanx dude"
20 Sep 2004:-) Amy Williams
Eloquent ..

:-) Kate 'The Pirate' Riley replies: "fabulous x"
19 Oct 2004:-) Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan
like an epic. very grand and beautiful. I love poetry, good poetry and this is good poetry.
Lx

11 Kate 'The Pirate' Riley replies: "thank u very much x"
8 Jun 200545 Progniskes
ah, such a lovely poem and how the visions dance inside my head. I envy thee and the talent that you bring. The story so lovely and yet so sad, that poor poor forgotten man. Love is so hard to gain yet so easily lost just like trust. I myself is in love with a creature I can not call human, for he sprouts wings and lets me fly with him, hand in hand up to the sky where we fly. Girl and boy upon the moon as I sing our tune. sorry for rambling, I just like rhyming. But you have a talent and I bow to thee that holds a mind of fantasy. Pleasant Something.

11 Kate 'The Pirate' Riley replies: "Coolness. Thank You! "
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About 'Just Children....':
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 • Created by: :-) Kate ´The Pirate´ Riley
 • Copyright: ©Kate ´The Pirate´ Riley. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Vampire(s), Angel(s), Occult, Romance, Kiss, Night
 • Categories: Angels, Religious, Spiritual, Holy, Romance, Emotion, Love, Urban Fantasy and/or Cyberpunk, Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic
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