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Kate ´The Pirate´ Riley

"Light" by Kate ´The Pirate´ Riley

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Ah this is the result of overexposure to Evenesence and Anne Rice novels (aka interview with the Vampire ect.) You probably won't get this straight off but it's about a deathwish from erm someone to a vampire. It's about just how seductive they can be. A free cookie for anyone who geusses what happens in the end!
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Light

 

Show me. Show me your hands,

Put out the light with your lips,

Kiss me, take me home,

Stain my soul with the darkness of your palms.

 

Love me. Love me then leave me cold,

Take for your own what was never yours,

Bleed me dry, I’ll be eternally grateful,

Take my heart, and give me the stars.

 

Reach for me. Reach for me, fall into me,

Even if ever I should resist,

Never forget, it’s what I really want,

Become mine, I’ll be yours, grant me my release.

 

I don’t want to cry, I don’t ever want to see,

The light of this world, a light that blinds me,

My only true love, yet my only true fear,

My immortal sin; wrap your arms around me.

 

If I can’t be saved, too lost, so I’ll be damned,

Stolen from the light,

The monsters in my nightmares, my only fearless allies,

To the moon my love, shattered dust in the sunlight.

 

 

 

 

 

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8 Jan 2004:-) JM Larsson
Wow.. very Evanescence! I could practically hear Amy Lee singing it in my head.


Beautiful, chilling, gorgeous, dark language, I loved!


"Stain my soul with the darkness of your palms"


THAT was my favorite, wow.

AS for the Johnny Depp discussions.. I won't go there.. I mean, I think he's good-looking and all.. MUCH BETTER than Pitt and Cruise [gag.gag], but I just don't.. 'want' him. :21hrugs:: My best friend wants all of them, though. Heh heh..

[Although, Jack Lined's appearence IS heavily based on his "Pirates" character because of 'her' origination as a female version of Jack Sparrow for a Halloween costume.. Well, my favorite of his is Sleepy Hollow.. Or is it? Johnny Depp is just the greatesty, most versatile actor I have ever.. *dazed* I should put my opinions on my bio, should I not? Erm, yes.. ]

Just wanted to check you out because.. You're a pirate lass, too! Yoohoo!

1 Kate 'The Pirate' Riley replies: "ah you don't want Johnny Depp...thats good thats really good...now I won't have to ki---*shifty eyes...becomes aware of self* ahhh that is Johnny is great as are Brad and Tom-boy especially in my fav film ever Interview with the Vampire!!! I have a thing with Vampires....and now pirates lol! Ah I'm so shallow......*whistling wind permits reflective silence* anyways! Thanx for the comment and stain my soul with the darkness of your palms....hmm I kinda like that one myself. completely forgot about that though!! I'll pop over to your gallery asap. Thank yoouuuu! K8 xx"
15 Jan 2004:-) Holly Knobloch
O wow! that is awesome! i love it great job!

22 Kate 'The Pirate' Riley replies: "hey positive! Thanks! I'll be round to your page laterz xx"
25 Feb 200445 John Bagwell
Er ... I've never watched 'Interview with a vampire' myself. Well, I saw a bit of it and chucked it in. 'Dracula: Dead and Loving it' is a much better film in my opinion. (Please don't hurt me)
Great poem. Much better than mine.

12 Kate 'The Pirate' Riley replies: "Nah I'll hold off killing you for now, cos I actually loved that film myself. It stood for everything I do...taking the piss out of everyone and everything lol. Quit putting yourself out. You're just as good as anyone on here!"
27 Feb 200445 John Bagwell
Thanks! Methinks I know what happens next
I'd say that the vamp says something like he can't do the willing, only the unwilling. Do I get that cookie now?

:-) Kate 'The Pirate' Riley replies: "um not sure what you're getting at there, the willing and the unwilling? Oh well have a cookie anyways cos I'm THAT nice x"
31 Mar 2004:-) James Tsatsaronis
*gratuitous applause and whisling* Brillient! Awesome! I never watched interview with a vampire *stops and beats off other comentors with a long stick* but your poem rocked hard and thats all that matters in the end

:-) Kate 'The Pirate' Riley replies: "fabulous and very encouraging thank you very much! You should watch interview with the vampire you haven't lived my friend!!!!!! x"
9 Apr 200445 John Bagwell
What I meant was, as a creature of evil, as in corruption, the vamp can only corrupt the innocent souls who aspire to holiness, not those souls that wish for the embrace of unholy evilness. Thanks for the cookie, by the way!

:-) Kate 'The Pirate' Riley replies: "wow you know that is really inovative and so inspired but honestly I didn't think that much into it *blush* oh well! I think I'll just let you explain my stuff for me from now on it'd sound much better heh heh"
9 May 2004:-) Cheyenne Kai
Yes, I absolutly loved this. But who doesn't? I wish I could think of something original to say to explain my feelings about it, especially the last paragraph, but I'm rubbish at telling my feelings. The ends sad. I love the vampires. LOUIS!!!! Yes, I have a slight obssession with him. Leave me alone.

1 Kate 'The Pirate' Riley replies: "Yay! More Louis fans! Although I have to say my favourite is Armand and of course the fabulous Lestat. Oh and don't worry about it. It's enough to say that you liked this I'm flattered. Hmm...still can't understand why everyone flocks to this one though lol xx"
19 May 2004:-) Karin Schadinger
^^ wonderful poem!!

1 Kate 'The Pirate' Riley replies: "Merci Beaucoup ^_^"
19 Oct 2004:-) Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan
This is very potent. I love the self giving nature. The voice is surrendering to the damned it seems. powerful, Gothic and sexy.
22 Dec 200845 Anon.
Lestat de Lioncourt was a *****.i didnt like him.
"is this a coffin?am i dead?!"
"why,yes it is. you must be dead!"
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About 'Light':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Kate ´The Pirate´ Riley
 • Copyright: ©Kate ´The Pirate´ Riley. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Death, Vampire, Mystic, Light
 • Categories: Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic, Romance, Emotion, Love
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