SciFi & Fantasy Fiction and Stories by H. ´Cirist´ Chute

Hey Cirist! I just recently put up a new piece called The Light of Orrim on my page. It's the Prologue and the first three chapters for a short novel that I'm writing for my nephew. It is in great need of help/comments... Hint, hint. And in return? - I shall read more of yours. Deal?

H. 'Cirist' Chute replies: "  Yay! More commentators! O happy day! I shall be updating Elftale and probably deleting Apprentice... On second thought, I might as well keep it."

'Ello my musican persimin. Your slaveness in both performances was wonderful daaaahling. I heard Loren talking about her account. I KEEP forgetting her last name. Would I be able to see her stuff if I looked up her last name? Yeah, and if not, I can hound her on friday about it. I'm nearly dead here though (in computer class is my current world postition) with BOREDOMEEEEEE. Anyways, I told me mother about Brian's cellaphane problem in the wash. Ah, life without it must be miserable for him. Will you be there friday? I might bring some actual food.

Catch ya later.

Sophia

H. 'Cirist' Chute replies: "You came to see me. It's Lauren Sarazen, by the way, but her account isn't really up yet, so... Oh, and I can't be there friday. Cotillion is ALWAYS the same day as UMYF. It be idiotic!"

Well I read them all, as you told me to in your bio, see aren't I nice? I even commented! Now get writing! I demand more! *this is a tried and proven method of getting authors to write, I like to call it comment bullying. It works both way a) the writer gets more comments which will invariably boost their self-esteem which will encourage them to; b) write more stories, which I get to read!!! yay!*

H. 'Cirist' Chute replies: "I know! I'm horrid! I just... haven't written anything. Um... I gave up on Apprentice (not that I completely agree with Dragon Rider, but it IS very Pern-like), the next chapter of Elftale is a mess and I need to do a complete rewrite, and Farthest Sun was just a fluke that I put up for fun. I'M SORRY! But I'll try to get writing on the Elftale..."

Hey Hannah! AAAAKKK! It's so annoying to have her Hannahness away in Canadia, mingling with all those Canadish people. Lauren is at Kidzone now...which means you are going to miss her ONE AND ONLY WEEK here. Next week she is going to Pennsylvannia (or however you spell the un-spellable word) for the writing thing. But you probably knew that because I mean....your HANNAH. I mean you and Lauren are like one word. LaurenandHannah. Not LAUREN and HANNAH. Anyways...you should write more! You left me for THREEE weeks...more actually! No new material..tsk tsk.

I NEEEED MOOOREEE!!!!

Come back to us Hannah, we miss you.

I give you lots of boiling hot lava!!!

-Sophia

H. 'Cirist' Chute replies: "  Of course I knew where she was! We are the Heec-Las, actually, not the HannahandLauren. And about the writing, see my reply above. By the by, exactly when did you see fit to STEAL my TITLE? I am the Supreme Ruler! Well, Lauren claims it too, so I guess we'll just have to share. Lava Lava Island! -Heec"

Haannah Bannannaaa.... where art thou? We watched the Goonies at church yesterday! Mike was there, although it was like invasion 6th graders! There were only like 11, but it felt like 50! Also, so weirdo kid decided it would be funny to write KILL (it being firday the 13th...so not funny) all over the church parking lot, and GUESS WHO HAD TO CLEAN IT UP? ALL OF US. Honestly, this ticked me off more than you can imagine. If he had had the guts to stick around and clean it up, I would have yelled at him so much that we would have had to clean HIM up.

Write more Hannah, and don't forget to tell Loren that I send her lava.

And I SUPPOSE you could get some too...


Hot BOILING Lava!!!

Sophia

Hello again. I just noticed that almost every comment here mentions me!! I'm so popular but not as popular as Galinda, of course! oooh..and to Sophie: hey! I miss you! email me! see ya at school Banana.

Hey Hannah Banana!
Whatever happened to your Elfwood-ness?? Have anything new for me to read? Okay...so I'm guilty. I haven't read a thing on here but yeah...It's so Anne Mcaffrey-ish/some author I forget. Take it as a compliment. See ya at Logos my love. You gotta come to dinner more often!! WOOO!

i’m writing a book and i hope you get far with your storys

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!""""""""""""my book is about the fight for rights in a school in the alps"

apprentice is a great story i think you should keep it, it just needs to be updated more.
when did you first writing apprentice?
and where di your inspiration cojme from?