Wonderful story development!!! I Can't wait to read more. Feel free to drop by my story somtime too if you're interested... and Thanks for the lovely "Cute!" comment on my page!!! ~_^ thanks and ur pic really wuz cute! love to see more creative work.
Your poems have true feeling. When reading them, it's almost like I am inside your head, feeling what you are. You are very descriptive and I like your style. You should consider writing fantasy books. You're good for a 15yr old. Thanks. I've tried writing fantasy stories before, but for me, it's a lot easier conveying my thoughts and feelings into a poem. I guess it's because I have a tendency to get off topic.
9 Feb 2002
Jessica E. Côté
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amazing, just amazing... i love your poetry! its ttruely beutiful.... whispers is my fave, cause i can definately relate to it. keep it up ~*good times*~ Jessica Yes, I think one of my best works here in the library is Whispers because it was something I had to go through when I changed schools again. And like it was for you, I can relate to it the most, making easier to express the feelings I had.
18 Mar 2002
Jake
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When you told me you wrote poetry, i expected the kind of stuff kids usually fancy "quality" art. I was wrong. Thanks, actually i'm still learning and growing, and i'm always trying to improve my writing. I'm glad you liked my work though
I must say, that your poems are great. Something I don't see in most people. The poems do make me feel something. Beautiful...Dunno what else to say. First of all, everyone is important in some way or another. And also, I'm glad my poems were able to move you in some way =D
Hey Auntie LoL. So did you show your Friends da Pictures to da Wedding Party a lil while ago hehehe its almost time for da Other Party see you dere. LoL I think this time I'll wear Black so I won't look like a Waiter.
15 Apr 2003
Jackie
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hullo helen...i finally actually read your poems!p.......comments as a friend:nice poems;comments as your cousin:you could do lots better...but your poem, whisper, was okey dokie.....anyways imya gonna use your poem for a skewl poetry recitatation thingy....don't worry imya gonna give you credit....o.....one more comment....MAKE YOUR POEMS SHORTER....I COULDN'T USE, whisper, BECAUSE IT'S SO LONG!cya... ur cuzin, jackie
I would just like to say that I am very suprised about your past, and I am curious why you never told me anything about it. Who is this Ryan fella? I never knew you guys were such good friends. Well, I hope you will be more open with me about your past, now that I have found out, about your "other" life.
Retlaw
30 Jun 2003
Anonymous
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Hmmm....Helen and ryan, sitting in a tree, s-h-o-o-ting robbie lee
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and ur pic really wuz cute! love to see more creative work.
p.......comments as a friend:nice poems;comments as your cousin:you could do lots better...but your poem, whisper, was okey dokie.....anyways imya gonna use your poem for a skewl poetry recitatation thingy....don't worry imya gonna give you credit....o.....one more comment....MAKE YOUR POEMS SHORTER....I COULDN'T USE, whisper, BECAUSE IT'S SO LONG!cya...
Well, I hope you will be more open with me about your past, now that I have found out, about your "other" life. 
