|16 Apr 1999|| Frederick S. Fudala|
It looks like a poster or perhaps a book marker. Something like that. I like the overall composition very much, however you need to work more on proportions. Also the face needs some rework.
|1 Jun 1999|| |
another terrific drawing! I love how the cloth she is holding above her head has the same pattern as the walkway she is walking along.
Her skirt almost looks like it is made of feathers. Really nice compositon.
|3 Jul 1999|| Christine|
very good! very like an Audrey Beardsley style.
|24 Oct 2002|| Laura|
I agree you need to work on the proportions and the face. The whole looks good but I can't really judge, I have no idea what you wanted to draw or represent and I just droped by by luck. Uhm...but if I had to be strict I'd say the idea's nice, but it lacks natural, she doesn't look like she's running, she looks stuck in motion.