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"Pantoum - Do Not Meddle in the Affairs of Dragons" by Victoria R. Hershiser

SciFi/Fantasy text 4 out of 20 by Victoria R. Hershiser. ←Previous - Next→

Just slightly morbid. See my main page for a definition of what pantoums are.

The pulp is sweeter than the rind

Fresh oranges

Sweet and juicy

But these are better

Fresh oranges

They’re so tasty

But these are better

Little morsels

They’re so tasty

Just like oranges

Little morsels

Dressed in armor

The pulp is sweeter than the rind

Just like oranges

Dressed in armor

Sweet and juicy.

Date	Name	Comment
28 Oct 2005	Dan Shevock	Loading... This one is quite twisted. (didn't help that when I read this allowed, I accidentally read "bitter" where it says "better") another enjoyable little piece.
21 Jun 2007	Elizabeth Conwell	Loading... Very nice. You said a few things a little bit too many times, but all and all it was a good poem. And now I want some oranges....
19 Mar 2008	Daniela cabrera	Loading... really creative! i like it.
14 May 2008	Jacob Bowdin	Loading... Ha ha! That was pretty good. :: pictures orange dressed in full plate :: Hmmm... it is good yes, once you past the tough exterior. Creative idea =)

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