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"Empty" by Hillary Kent

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Another poem I came up with a long time ago and just finished recently. It's a bit more of a story than my other ones.
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←- Dave the Dragon | Forsaken: Part 4 A Change of Plan -→


Through the wood and over the slumbering mountain

Atop the hill before a whispering fountain

Stands the castle, forlorn above the empty plain

Silent now that there is no one to hear its cry



Once there were many that came to stay within me

And to praise my gracious lady; how good was she!

But that was before the coming of her greatest enemy

When still her golden laughter through my halls did fly



He came first to us as a friend and not as foe

An enchantment of awe upon us he did throw

We knew neither where he came nor where he would go

We knew only that he passed us laughingly by



In the guise of a wizard bound in enchantment

He offered to perform for our entertainment

Who can say if his offer was truly meant?

Or if it was a carefully concealed lie



We found out quickly what his smiles really did hide

Jealousy drove him; time he did carefully bide

Upon us an unspeakable menace he cried

And whispered with a cold smile for us to die



Caught unawares we fell as any other would

One by one he killed us all just because he could

Fighting to the end but wondering if we should

Because our lady we were watching slowly die



My bones of stone and sinews of steel feel the bite

The wind mourns its way through me in the night

My only company now is the birds in flight

The silence of Death in my hollow halls does lie



And now my proud lady is gone into the dust

With none to remember I stand alone as I must

With her gone, I only exist and slowly rust

And empty, empty is my silent forlorn cry



←- Dave the Dragon | Forsaken: Part 4 A Change of Plan -→

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29 May 2010:-) Lena Bazhenova
Beautifully written. It’s made me sad, but I still like it. I can picture this castle, with a sheet of mist hanging over it, with overgrown gardens and not a soul in sight.

:-) Hillary Kent replies: "Yeah, I like those old, abandoned ruins you see in pictures sometimes. They’re so sad... I’m glad you liked it. "
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'Empty':
 • Created by: :-) Hillary Kent
 • Copyright: ©Hillary Kent. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Castle, Lady, Light, Sorrow, War
 • Categories: Fights, Duels, Battles, Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc., Royalty, Kings, Princes, Princesses, etc, European Traditions, Mythology
 • Views: 353

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