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"Something about love" by Kim P. E. Hjelm

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Something about loveÖ

You took the pigeon in from the cold

You gave it a name and gave it a home

But the spring is here and the time has come

To take it outside and to let it go

I know it might be hard to loose a friend

But somehow i know it will be back again

Itís just like the love, it comes then itís gone

So charish the time and try to hold on

And remember in the times of sorrow

Another day a new love will be born

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8 Aug 200045 Madeline Jane Quirk
The flow of this is beautiful and it has a very sweet feel about it 2
22 Apr 200645 Ddz_grl16
"Another day a new love will be born." Very true...love this line. Sounds to me like you speak from experiance. Very good, as usual...
8 May 200645 Anonymous
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'Something about love':
 • Created by: :-) Kim P. E. Hjelm
 • Copyright: ©Kim P. E. Hjelm. All rights reserved!

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