|22 Oct 2003|| Velvet Memory|
I have changed my mind, THIS is my favourite poem you have written. There is no word to describe it. It is so realistic, I suppose. You are very talented at rhyming, too. When I write, I cannot rhyme. All my work seems stilted when I do. Again, excellent work! Oana Taylor
replies: "thank you. I have to threaten all my friends to leave comments. it's nice to see there's somebody out there who doesn't believe i'm a complete nutcase, lol!"
|2 Nov 2003|| Tia from writers' camp 02|
Me like me like
not sure ...
Decaying flesh? Ew! Sounds like terminator 4! (yeah, right!) but is still good Oana Taylor
replies: "yes, well.....i wrote this in my morbid stage. you're supposed to be totally grossed out."
|2 Nov 2003|| Natasha 'Tazie' Wickland|
Muhaha...evil...*giggles insanely* good poem Oana Taylor
replies: "uh..thanks...i think*smiles, nods and slowly backs away*"
|5 Nov 2003|| Alexander Drakewing|
I really like this poem. You're good! Keep up the good work!! ^_^ Oana Taylor
replies: "thank you!!!"
|9 May 2007|| Dalken|
The best work i have ever seen,good work!
|14 Jun 2008|| Jacob Bowdin|
Hmmm, very interesting, I tend to over use that word, but it truly is. I liked, "The mist of death and darkness sweeping," that opening line was probably my favorite out of the whole thing. Nice imagery and description.