| 15 Jun 2001 | Mikhail Shvyryev | Loading...Such beautiful imagery leaves the reader feeling cheated. *chuckle* | |
| 24 Aug 2001 | Christopher Robin Regan | Loading...I guess something DID happen. And there was indeed a Star after all. Thanks for your comments on my story. I enjoyed your piece as well. | |
| 6 Nov 2001 | Tristan Bronkhorst | Loading...came here first cos 'Luna' is one of my favorite names (it's from a song by Smashing Pumpkins, and a dog i know in Big city Madrid who loves to bite socks) enfin... Whenever i see a full moon it always puts me up in some kinda mode, hopeful, maybe waiting for something to come maybe it's like what the feeling you've described... | |
| 4 Jan 2002 | Rose | Loading...I still like this piece, just the way it is. It's exactly how I would have written it (haha, with that last sentence 'But nothing did'). Cause if something would have happened..then it would have never been something more exiting...then when nothing happened. (complicated, but I think you get what I mean).
groetjes, Rose (the one and only ) | |
| 22 Feb 2002 | Oliver S. Nothers | Loading...I had to think of a few events when I read this... first, I thought of the events when I sometimes see a blood moon, or when she looks like a narrow eye-slit... And then, it reminded me of a pretty old metal song by Axxis, "The Moon" - "Full moon, I'm watching you, your light touches my face... you seem to be so great tonight, I wonder if you'll change your light..." | |
| 1 Mar 2002 | Some person | Loading...i STILL think the moon should've winked. | |
| 1 Mar 2002 | Some person | Loading...The moon should've winked... a face should've appeared on it and winked at the girl. then she could rant about it to everyone else who ALL happened to NOT be looking at the moon at that particular time, therefore, missing the face thing. since no one believes her, she could then be comitted into a nice facility where she can drink tea with bunnies and stars and play golf. | |
| 30 Mar 2002 | Cissy N. Nimbita | Loading...Hi Sman! I liked this one. While reading it, I just could see every scene in my head. In cartoon style of course Funny thing: the whole scene you described, was really recognizable to me --> the moon seeming different and waiting for something to happen and stuff... Maybe we could stare at the moon together sometime  <p>p.s. Oh yeah, almost forgot: I'm online! JEEEEEEE! (that's 'YAY!' for you  </p> | |
| 20 May 2009 | Silvannen Mystic Dragonrider Gerrard | Loading...I think it’s really ironic how both your story and Christopher R. Regan’s refer to almost the same thing! Great piece of writing! | |