| 15 Jan 2010 |  Meg Rachor |  Loading...AKA I saw the attachment and addressed it in another email   Ray Krisman replies: "Ah I guess I caught you between e-mails then. BTW: A dozen dozen was better than saying "About a hundred, give or take fifty". But I was antsy about it coming across as a repetition so I changed it to dozens upon dozens.
And I liked "deigned". Its a pretty word! But changed it to "come so far as to", even though its more boring.
That sun was hectically personified! I should be careful or people will think it’s a real character! Btw, sent you an e-mail." | |
| 15 Jan 2010 | Meg Rachor | Loading... I saw the email. And thanks for changing the deigned. I agree, it is a pretty word, but perhaps not so suited to that Ray Krisman replies: "I replied to your e-mail about Priors... There’s a possibility I made it worse, but those things are just an indication of the type of stuff you can do. Mostly just to pace up the action.
Hmm. You’re dominating my guestbook..." | |
| 18 Jan 2010 |  Anon. | Loading... Moo. Somtimes it take a loooong time for my head to clear... | |
| 18 Jan 2010 |  Frances Monro | Loading... Mooo. Sometimes it takes a long time for my head to clear... Ray Krisman replies: "Methinks the moose lost his goose... " | |
| 19 Jan 2010 | Frances Monro | Loading... It’s cooked! My goose is cooked! | |
| 20 Jan 2010 | Meg Rachor | Loading... HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEYYYYYYYYYYY! Ray Krisman replies: "Really fun to scream mentally? 
Howsit going?
My internet cap is about 2 run out 4 the month so prolly won’t be on here till it gets renewed :/" | |
| 21 Jan 2010 | Meg Rachor | Loading... | |
| 3 Feb 2010 | Meg Rachor | Loading... Maybe? I haven’t been writing, so you didn’t miss anything Ray Krisman replies: "Me neither. Varsity pwns me. When I get home I only have a handful of hours b4 going 2 sleep and I have to choose what I wanna do, can’t do everything i want. And right now I’m so hooked onto the book I started (Wheel of Time, anyone?) that options 2, 3 4 and five just never see any action.
Thou I was thinking of a short story as an experiment to try descriptions & my ability to create a unique world. I was thinking along the lines of creatures and a world that are completely imaginative and unthought of. Been trying to work out the anatomy of an organism that has little or none of the organs earth creatures have. " | |
| 4 Feb 2010 | Nicola | Loading... Writers block. I hate writers block. Sorry for this random comment but I’m completely stuck on a short story I’m writing. Or should I say trying to write. Ray Krisman replies: "This happens to me too. And I really dislike it that what I consider a hobby feels like work sometimes. If its work, why on earth do I do it? Got enough work already....
So i suppose if you don’t feel like it, don’t do it. Unless its your job and you have to force it out so u can make money, just do it when inspiration strikes. " | |
