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Britta Noelle Amaranth

"Dangerous" by Britta Noelle Amaranth

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This was a poem that I wrote in a total of 10-15 minutes. I have always loved the thought of Vampires and all the mystical suspense that follows them.

Let me know what you think, i happen to like it, I have a picture in my mind to go with it, now if I can just get it down on paper!!

 


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Vampire Guy:

Danger

You smell It

Hear It

Feel It

 

See Me

You don"t run

Don"t hide

Aren"t silent

 

Yet you"ve been

Looked over by others like me

Then the pain, from loving me

Hurt for knowing I don"t want change you

 

My knowing that it hurts you to see me not age while you do

Now you"ve become

What I never wanted for you :

 

DANGEROUS

 

Vampire Girl:

Now it is late, yet you don"t sleep

You never age; it"s been centuries since you did

You can’t be in the sun, but used to always have the perfect tan

Your frozen to touch, but were always the warmest of us all

Why?

 

I know

You know

That’s why I was sought out

Why you were told to change me

Yet you hesitated

Why?

 

Because you couldn’t believe your feelings for me

You didn’t want to put me through the pain

You love me that’s why

And I love you and was an innocent

Yet no matter how hard you tried, I still became a…

 

VAMPIRE

 

 

 

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DateNameComment 
19 Jun 2009:-) Oswald Johnathon Levesque
Where you use ’hard sounds’ like "k" or "p" to make a cold, scary, or depressing effect.

:-) Britta Noelle Amaranth replies: "ok, that makes sense
"
22 Jun 2009:-) Oswald Johnathon Levesque
I really neat- lots of poets don’t know that much about poetry and can still produce something extraordinary...
23 Jun 2009:-) Oswald Johnathon Levesque
Corny 1 ?

:-) Britta Noelle Amaranth replies: "hehe a little bit 1"
2 Jul 2009:-) Melissa Myers
Wonderful poetry, by the way. What was your inspiration?

:-) Britta Noelle Amaranth replies: "i had just gotten done reading the book Tantalize, and i have been wanting to write a poem about forbidden love and out comes this

plus i hadn’t written a thing for months and my friend Nathanael helped nudge me back on track 2"
3 Sep 2009:-) Yoni Danziger
True love changes you eh? 1
I really loved your poem, well done!

:-) Britta Noelle Amaranth replies: "thank-you 2
and yes true love changes you a lot"
18 Sep 2009:-) Dustin L Mann
hey thats not bad you wouldnt happen to read the twilight series do you

:-) Britta Noelle Amaranth replies: "Yes i have read the twilight series, it took me about a week to finish, i’m a fast reader 14

but this is just based on the fact that i love vampires, and i had just gotten done reading a book about them, also i hadn’t written anything for months, and my firned Nathanael told me to just start writing, he also proofed it and loved it 2"
19 Sep 2009:-) Neesha Jill Anderson
very cool. great job!

:-) Britta Noelle Amaranth replies: "Thank-you, i’m glad you enjoyed it 2"
7 Oct 2009:-) Marie Violetmoon Richy
Thank you for a wonderful poem Britta.
So sad ... is it your dream? 2

:-) Britta Noelle Amaranth replies: "no it’s not a dream just a writing, although i think it would be neat to be a vampire, except for having to drink blood..although i could just be like the Cullens and drnk animal blood, but still i just like the idea, i don’t think i would actually want to be a vampire"
24 Nov 2009:-) Reanne Sinclair
Very nice poem 2 Forbidden love is always so bittersweet
19 Dec 2009:-) Cory R. Sparks
wow very good this is a great poem and then the ending was the perfect ending for this.1 very good1413
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'Dangerous':
 • Created by: :-) Britta Noelle Amaranth
 • Copyright: ©Britta Noelle Amaranth. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Boy, Girl, Hurt, Love, Pain, Vampire, Vampiress
 • Categories: Man, Men, Romance, Emotion, Love, Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic, Woman, Women
 • Submitted: 2009-05-08 17:25:47
 • Views: 601

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