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"Untitled" by Jacqueline(Jackal) Pirtle

SciFi/Fantasy text 12 out of 13 by Jacqueline(Jackal) Pirtle. ←Previous - Next→

I was bored one day...

←- River of Death | Voodoo doll -→

As the sun settles, night it brings

Like the whispering of dark wings

Speckled with the everlasting light

That seems so dim, yet always bright

And a single eye looks down

On the quiet world that it has found

←- River of Death | Voodoo doll -→

Date	Name	Comment
7 Jan 2003	Lucrin Nightshade	Loading... So far, so good. But, it seems...icomplete. When I got to the end, it left me hanging. But, you know, if that's your thing, then that's your thing. This is just my personal opinion, ya know? Anyways, I'm lovin' your work. Keep it up!
30 Jan 2008	Dragon’s #1 fan	Loading... Found what?! WHAT WORLD HAVE THEY FOUND?! i don’t really have much 2 say besides i agree with Lucrin. it does seem incomplete, but other then that it’s seriously is a VERY awesome poem.
17 May 2010	Roz Margaret Wolberger	Loading... i dont think it is incomplete- its beautiful how every time i read it it has a different connotation! i love it!

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'Untitled':

• Created by:

Jacqueline(Jackal) Pirtle
• Copyright: ©Jacqueline(Jackal) Pirtle. All rights reserved!

• Keywords: Dark, Goth, Moon, Night, Nightsky, Sky, Stars
• Categories: Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc.
• Views: 307

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