| 8 Jun 2005 | Katie Collishaw | Loading...hmm.. I must say that I'm not seeing how you got "Just a fool." out of this, but eh, I wasn't the one inspired huh? lol. I was thinking more along the lines of a castle's entertainer guy.. But, I loved it anyway!! very good job.. it just doesn't seem long enough.. Jacqueline 'Jac' Tanner replies: "Its where the words took me. In my mind i was going to talk about a pregnant woman who got pregnant by mistake... but when i opened word this came out instead. Try the words for yourself and see what you ocme up with. Simple phrases sometimes can be the best inspiration" | |
| 20 Aug 2005 | Julia Anna Rill | Loading...Oh wow! How cute and beautiful! Are you planning to write more about this?It almost sounds like a prologue of some bigger story! But anyway, i like it! You have a great style and a fantastic idea! Jacqueline 'Jac' Tanner replies: "Thanks so much. It was written quickly and cleaned up so i didnt mean to do anything with it. I want to maybe write more on it but we will have to see. Thanks again for your comment!" | |
| 5 Oct 2005 | Andrijana Ignjatovic | Loading..."Just a Fool", the title, is a bit off, but inspiration can make you wander strange roads. I for some reason thought of "A Midsummer-night“s dream" and I really like how you portrait the faerie. In my mind a faerie have always been little trickster. I guess he“s not going to raise the child. Jacqueline 'Jac' Tanner replies: "Yeah im a tad crazy. But thats what the words bought me. i started writing and i know it didnt really go with what i the title said but i liked it anyways. i wanted to originally keep going along this idea but i think itll stay the way it is until i clean it up one day." | |
| 14 Dec 2005 | Clarence Likness | Loading...This story was unable to keep my attention for very long... guess im getting tired Jacqueline 'Jac' Tanner replies: "Thanks ok its a very short story and doesnt have as much action as some of the others so i can understand that." | |
| 3 Jan 2006 | Laura de Lange | Loading...Short is sweet! Lovely easy read, I enjoyed it. Poor woman, first she had only one night with him and then she has to flee her home and THEN it sounds like her child has a spell on her. Not very lucky, is she? Very foolish... | |
| 20 Mar 2007 | Danielle J. Sanderson | Loading...It's really amazing how three small words can turn into something so intricate. I know I never would have come up with even the slightest detail the same, and that's what makes it so amazing. Just knowing that the whole thing sprang from the words "Just a fool"... wow! Good job!  Jacqueline 'Jac' Tanner replies: "Ah yes, words are a great thing for inspiration. Its annoying when you are out and about though. I remember i read an add on a billboard a while ago, constructed this whole story in my head and when i got home it was gone ah well. Thanks for commenting!" | |
| 21 Jun 2007 | L. “Frog“ Janas | Loading...I thought that was so sweet! Considering how short a time you wrote it in, the structure was very good. I think if you had the time, it could benefit from a reread/proofread just because some of the sentences are awkward or don't fit so well. Overall, I feel like you captured the main ideas very well in a very small amount of words. Good job ^__^ Jacqueline 'Jac' Tanner replies: "*parties like its 1999* You are my 100th commenter *gives you gifts* i feel like i should give you something for being my 100th commenter. Yes this definitely needs to be reread and fixed up and i am planning on doing it one day hehe. Thanks for the 100th comment *dances around* " | |
| 1 Jul 2007 | Dragonsluver | Loading...This is so beautiful! I love it! Especially the ending line! There is a sweetness in this story and a quality that makes me think of the older fantasy tales (the ones before Tolkien). Oh! I love this story! Jacqueline 'Jac' Tanner replies: "Awww thanks so very much! This story has many mistakes in it, but i still like the idea behind it! Not sure about the older style stories but i will definitely take that as a MAJOR compliment!" | |
| 3 Jul 2007 | Vera L Scudder | Loading...I love this story; it's just too sweet. Funny the way words can inspire an idea just to have it turn into something completely different along the way. Jacqueline 'Jac' Tanner replies: "It is funny that isn't it? Words used to just bring forth images for me and this story would pop into my head and off i would go... been a while since i've been able to do that! Oh well. Thanks for the comment *beams*" | |
| 15 Jul 2007 | Kelsey M. Graham | Loading...pleaseohpleaseohplease write another part... you can't just end it there! I mean, you could write a huge long story about her daughter growing up...or something... * gives kicked-puppy eyes* pweety pweeeze? | |