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Jasmine Pang

"Elemental Divine" by Jasmine Pang

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Cleo kind of inspired this - at least my dream about her and Mark Antony triggered it off. Somehow that scene was somewhat ironical, though it really did happen in true life.
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Zero beauty enchants
To follow where none venture
Drifting past the mirror of
Her glimmering self
As the trees reached out
To stroke their daughter of hate

Dry up your tears and come
The road of beloved truth
Underlying rusty silver and gold
And hard rocks to cushion your fall

The sun has gone
Too far to lead the paths
To walk into daydreamed castles
She is surrounded by clouds
That only exist
When people embrace hope and love

Stay where you wish no matter
If your journey only gives
A grey casket holding portraits
To lift you to the skies

There is nothing between
The silver walls which
Steadfastly holds her cries
Through the portal into
The land where she can only
See the crowd amidst herself

Look at the stars shine
Through the purple sky
Impossiblity within all
Held in your hands

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6 Dec 2001:-) Lenore L. Towne
Nice free verse. So true.
29 Dec 2001:-) Erica G. Wilson
Wow, the words are of a living sort I would guess... the flow is fantastic, and I do look forwards to reading more!!
18 Mar 2002:-) J. Gilbert Coates
Very fluid and enchanting. Namaste.
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'Elemental Divine':
 • Created by: :-) Jasmine Pang
 • Copyright: ©Jasmine Pang. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Divine, Divinity, Element, Elemental
 • Categories: Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc.
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