|6 Dec 2001|| Lenore L. Towne|
Hmmm...very good. I like this one too.
|29 Dec 2001|| Erica G. Wilson|
I like the imagry, I know this is the stove calling the kettle black, but try not to go too overboard! Good luck!!
|7 Feb 2002|| Elizabeth Fitzgerald|
I can really, REALLY identify with this poem. I think it is well thought out. Sucinct without being too brief and a fantastic use of imagery. I honestly don't think there is too much of it at all.
|11 Sep 2002|| Wendy|
Jasmine!!!! You poot. A talented one at that
|15 Jan 2005|| Stephanie M. Sargent|
I know exactly where you're comming from. I actually tried to write a poem like this a couple days ago, but I never got past the frist verse, which itself needed work. Damn my inablitiy to write poetry, damn it all to Hell(lol). Good job!