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Jasmine Pang

"Work of Art" by Jasmine Pang

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Inspired during one of my reccess-time-romps at the oh-so-forbidden area behind the school. I could just feel something there...
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The first time I saw her
Was at an old run-down bridge
Forlorn with a distastful glare
He dirty creased clothes
Contrasted with her white
Fair skin and cold
Hard brown eyes
The whispering wind played
With her long red hair
Like a new found friend

But oblivious to my stares she
Looked ahead with uplifted eyes
As if something that I could
Not see at all
Stood within the mist
Waving her hands to greet
The eerie silence of perfect matter
Like a filmy mirage
About to disappear

There I stood like a
Wide-eyed fool
Unable to comprehend the simplicity
Within its profound meaning
Light rain fell like
Pearls from the sky
Washing away the picture
As butterflies flew round
Leaving in completion a
Beautiful masterpiece

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6 Dec 2001:-) Lenore L. Towne
Oooooooooo...I like, I like.
29 Dec 2001:-) Erica G. Wilson
Eerie, she reminds me of a Slyph, or elf maybe even, I really like it, and good use of words!!
27 Jan 2002:-) Richard Booty
Out of all of yer poems I like this one the best! As mentioned above, great use of words!!!

Only 13? Gah, you put me to shame 1
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'Work of Art':
 • Created by: :-) Jasmine Pang
 • Copyright: ©Jasmine Pang. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Girl, Image, Masterpiece, Mystic, She, Silence
 • Categories: Faery, Fay, Faeries, Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc.
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