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"Concerning Areth´yncain, by Dana Mentir" by Jeff Burke

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Really incomplete. I'll publish more as it goes on. It is a pretty good idea to start here before reading Dragon's Awakening, but if you want to read Heart's Song you could survive without it, as the above is mostly included.
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Concerning Areth’yncain

By Dana Mentir

 

Introduction

 

            We are not alone.

 Do not misinterpret this; aliens are little more than the fantasies of the dangerously schizophrenic or the maliciously untruthful.  Aliens belong in the same textbooks as cold fusion, presidential conspiracies, and the idea of phigolsten being the element pertaining to heat.  Fallacies spread by the misguided or the confused.

            But dragons are another story entirely.  They have existed for almost as long as the Homo sapiens, yet the majority of those who read this are ignorant of them.  Do not be surprised; these dragons have evolved, or been endowed by their Creator with, a very unique hunting mechanism: they are a species that can change shape at will.

           

 

Species classification

 

            The word species may, in fact, not be correct.  To begin, a person must come to a concrete definition of the word “species.”  Most would assume that a species is a group of organisms that look and behave in much the same way.  What defines the species of the honeybee?  The yellow stripes?

            There is a type of fly that has stripes that look almost identical to that of a honeybee.  It even behaves in much the same way as a bee.  

            So what then?  A species is a group of animals or plants that can reproduce with one another, many would say.  A far more specific arrangement. 

            According to both of the above definitions, these dragons can only be classified as members of the human species.  In their human form they are next to undistinguishable from any “normal” human.  And what is more, they can mate with humans, while holding a human form

            As such, dragons and humans could not be called different species any more than a black man and a white one.  Instead, they are more of a “race.” 

 

 

Races

 

            An Asian man and a black woman may have children.  They also will behave in much the same way, at least from a physiological prospective. Yet one has tan skin and the other is dark, are they of different species?

            Certainly not, the mere idea is preposterous.  And what of the man who is born with six fingers?  Is he a different species?  The dwarf?  The albino woman?  Is she human?

            In the same way an areth’yncain is human. 

 

 

Genetics

 

            Albinism is a genetic defect.  Some where on the billions of strands of DNA in the chromosomes, something went wrong.  This defect transfers into the making of protein, and an amino acid is left out or forgotten, the entire protein is ruined, having apparent physical effects: the lack of pigment in the skin, hair and eyes.

            Now imagine that there were more of these defects.  So many, in fact, that the entire gene can be considered different than normal.  What if seventeen of these defected genes were to be present?  The resulting organism would be very different than a “normal” human.   These genes are rare, however, and highly recessive. 

 

 

Mitochondria

 

 

            The power plants of the cells.  It is inside this little bean shaped organ that cellular respiration occurs, giving cells the energy they need to function.  Each mitochondrion has a unique set of DNA, independent from that of the cell it is in. 

            This in it self is surprising, but the truly astounding thing is that this DNA is identical in every single human alive on this planet.  Except for a small few.   These rare individuals have a slightly different set of mitochondrial DNA, making the little reactors slightly more powerful, more efficient.  Mitochondrial DNA is passed down through the mother.

 

 

Effects

 

            The effects of these two traits can be quite astounding.  The genetic defects allow for the areth’yncain to maintain a human shape and a draconian shape, while the mitochondiral distinction allow the dragon to assert either shapes gentic code, changing shape.

 

 

Heredity

 

            The areth’yncain are a race of humanity.  As such they have the ability to mate with other humans, at least in their human shape.  The logistical problems of a human and a dragon in his draconian shape need not be explained.  However, the child will be human in the vast majority of cases. Here is a list of many possible combinations:

.           All 17 genes, mitochondria       = areth’yncain (full-dragon)

            All 17 genes, no mitochondria  = hyrex’yncain (half-dragon)

            Some genes, mitochondria        =human

            Some genes, no mitochondria   =human

            No genes, mitochondria            = human

            No genes, no mitochondria       = human

 

            The vast majority of the humans on the planet fall under the last category. 

 

Origins

 

            Unknown.  The Europeans first produced accurate drawings/sketches of the areth’yncain, so it is not too farfetched to assume that the dragons find their origins there.

 

Conclusion

 

            It should be noted that this guide is grossly incomplete.  More information shall be presented as it is learned. 

←- A Christmas Tale | Dragon's Fate -→

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9 Apr 2004:-) Alice Muffin Girl Smith
You: 'And it would be very hard to explain the above to people from an 1850's time table. Genetics itself was still in its fledgeling state--assuming Mendel had even discovered it yet-- and I doubt that an eighteen year old orphan living on an island would know about it.'

Muffin: *is sitting cross-legged in a grassy meadow, her eyes sagely watching you* There are more ways than one to portray what is true, grasshopper. If you wish your readers to know, then allow them to know. The sparrow does not know of this Mendel, yet it recognises that the blue jay is not its own kind.

Also, if you wish to recommend a tale, recommend a tale. The sparrow does not know your inner wishes. It knows only what it is told, what it can see, and what it can feel.

Sparrow: *shivers as it hides from you behind Muffin* Why does he keep yelling at me to read this introduction? I want to read a real story!

Muffin: He says that it is only a recommendation, my feathered friend.

Sparrow: Tell that to my mother! Just look what those caps locks did to her poor eyes!

Sparrow's Mother: AHH! MY EYES!

Muffin: *looks at you, and nods sagely* Listen to nature, grasshopper, for it has much to teach.

:-) Jeff Burke replies: "Sheesh! Okay, I'll tone it down a bit. *mutters something about "...stupid birds..." If you're telling me you can explian genetics like the above in the 1850's, I'd love to hear how (I'm not being sarcastic, I really would like to throw it in somehow.) Oh, by the way... I've not even started the stories that have you in them...got to finsish the fifth chapter of me book (yes, I know I just said "me" and not "my". I do actually say "me [object] in real life.) I should have some of it done by the time I get back from South Carolina, but it'll be done on paper (as in: notebook), so don't expect it anytime soon. The bright side is that you're an important character! So follow Monty Python, and "Always Look on the Bright Side of Life (whistle)""
18 May 2004:-) Rebecca A. Morgan
*grin* I likes your stories... yessss I do. *wanders towards number three*
6 Aug 2004:-) Katherine Potapova
Yay! I love this. God, you know so much science! I love it when people explain scientifically magical phenomena. In fact I have my own little theory on the evolution of dragons, a sadly undetailed one.
One thing: I think this needs a bit more -un-scientific information. You know, to relieve the poor mere mortals whose minds are hurting from all the references to DNA and genetics and... science. (Wow, I'm such a great scientist, aren't I...) I think it can be done without the text losing its scientificness.
Also maybe you could tell how these things were discovered? It would be interesting.

:-) Jeff Burke replies: "Nope. If a reader can't understand this, then they need to go learn it. remember, Knowledge is power.

AS for discovery...You'll have to read "Heart's Song." Then You'll figure it out."
7 Aug 200445 Danielle *Cheetah Tamer* Fonseca
Here I am!
Thought I'd read this before coninuing with you prologue of your story um Dragon's Awakening (thats right?)

anyway I started with the prologue and so far it has me intrigued and honestly I never would have guessed him to abe a dragon... he is one right? anyway I thought I'd read this to get some more info on your story which I did and when I have a chance I'll continue on with your prologue once agian.

:-) Jeff Burke replies: "Uh..."him?" There are about ten characters in that prologue, and all of them are male. Can you be a little more specific, mayhaps?"
8 Aug 200445 Danielle *Cheetah Tamer* Fonseca
heh Sorry meant the first male character you mentioned that one thats different form the rest and egdy.. can't recall his name at the moment and I haven't read through the whole prologue yet...
had to go out. But I'll read the rest soon enough!^_^

:-) Jeff Burke replies: "I think you mean Christopher O'brien?"
6 Oct 2004:-) Erin M. Ramos
One thing: Genes are either recessive or they aren't. Not highly recessive.

You have a good understanding of biology and a basic understanding of genetics. And you obviously put a lot of time and effort into this.

Good job!

:-) Jeff Burke replies: "You've got a point there. "
27 Jun 2005:-) Sarah J Kinder
Well interesting. Putting a scientific/biological background to one's creations is something I also enjoy. 2

Being a biologist I'd have to agree with one of your other commenters and say 17 genes and a mitochondrial sequence would be extremely unlikely to cause one to become a human vs. dragon. It's take a whole LOT more information than that. It's very easy to break things genetically but hard to actually add something useful - without breaking what's already there.

If I were you and I wanted to go for something a bit more "realistic" . . . I would make your "dragon gene" not a set of genes but perhaps another subcellular organelle - like say a chloroplast in plants or possibly another pair of chromosomes (perhaps an entire extra genome). If it were an organelle it would be inherited maternally only (unless you put in some stuff about how it was occasionally passed through the male line - this happens in plants). And extra chromosome or genome would be lost after a second generation of breeding back to human.

Anyway it might completely break the rest of your stories or something so do what you think is best - not a whole lot of people will recognize the "unrealistic" aspects anyway. Overall nicely done. I don't think it's necessary for the reader to know the scientific background of these dragons but I think it is very good that you've decided to write one.

-S

:-) Jeff Burke replies: "yeah...I knew that it was crap when I wrote it. But being a student with only one year of biology--and that being three years before I wrote this(very tiny school)-I didn't really have any clue of how else to do it. And I thought it might be neat to do something like this. Even if I can't adaquetely explain it. anyways, this story has pretty much died anyways. *shrugs.* Now onto trying to explain werewolves. Th best I've managed to come up with is a virus transmitted through bodily fluids--saliva, blood...even semen, though trying to work that into a story would be awkward, to say the least--and responds to certian wavelengths/fequencies of light in the tissue of the skin and especially in the retina of the eye. As for the actual transformation...I'd say it pulls a newt, only really fast. Degenerates bodily tissues back to stem cells. Trick with that is it would take an enormous amount of energy...and probably produce a huge amount of waste heat. Not to mention it would very likely hurt like hell."
15 Jul 2005:-) Erin M. Ramos
I kinda forgot, you can also have co-dominant genes. that's how you get the different blood types, and it's why if an african individual mates with a caucasian individual, the child usually has a sort of mocha collered skin.
8 Aug 2006:-) Alexandru Moisi
hmm seems to lack on some science stuff but for me(an absolute ignorant of biology and chemestry) it sounded good. Seems like a nice intro and sparked my interest for your dragons. Also a nice idea and explanation.
Good job!
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About 'Concerning Areth'yncain, by Dana Mentir':
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 • Created by: :-) Jeff Burke
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 • Keywords: Dragon, Lycanthrope, Shapeshifting, Dna, Mitochondia
 • Categories: Lycanthrope, Were-folk, etc, Dragons, Drakes, Wyverns, etc
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