| 21 Jan 2003 |  The Author |  Loading...Thanks for the tips. Making a prologue sounds like a good idea. I'll get right on it.  | |
| 21 Jan 2003 |  Jeanette 'Mus' deBoer | Loading... Hi. Welcome to the woods. A few things. I started reading Chapter 1 of your story, (what a novel place to start...) and I really love the concept! True, I haven't really gotten to the plot yet, but what I read, I really liked. The actual writing could use some tweaking. If I may, I would suggest writing a prologue in which you explain, in some creative way about these Harnessers and Whispers, or an appendix with definitions and such in it. I find that the breaking of the story to explain what something is draws away from it a bit. Excellent start, and keep writing! | |
| 22 Jan 2003 | Rosie Farias | Loading... Hello James, haven't read your work yet but I will. And thanks for saying hello to me. Nice to be your neighbor, haha. Exciting. | |
| 28 Jan 2003 |  Jason J. Romein | Loading... Welcome to elfwood! Glad you finally made it through the list! Sorry I didn't comment earlier, but I hadn't checked the ones on my own page for a while. =P | |
James G. S. Marshall / Writings
