|21 Jan 2003|| The Author|
Thanks for the tips. Making a prologue sounds like a good idea. I'll get right on it.
|21 Jan 2003|| Jeanette 'Mus' deBoer|
Hi. Welcome to the woods.
A few things. I started reading Chapter 1 of your story, (what a novel place to start...) and I really love the concept! True, I haven't really gotten to the plot yet, but what I read, I really liked. The actual writing could use some tweaking. If I may, I would suggest writing a prologue in which you explain, in some creative way about these Harnessers and Whispers, or an appendix with definitions and such in it. I find that the breaking of the story to explain what something is draws away from it a bit. Excellent start, and keep writing!
|22 Jan 2003|| Rosie Farias|
Hello James, haven't read your work yet but I will. And thanks for saying hello to me. Nice to be your neighbor, haha. Exciting.
|28 Jan 2003|| Jason J. Romein|
Welcome to elfwood! Glad you finally made it through the list! Sorry I didn't comment earlier, but I hadn't checked the ones on my own page for a while. =P