"Ode to Solitude" by Jessica Danielle Hunt

First off, i like the idea behind your poem. I think you've conjured a lot of cool images and i really enjoyed it! However i think it needs a bit of work still, so hopefully i can help you with a bit of healthy criticism...
The most important thing is that you sort out the number of silables in each rhyming line and keep them reasonably consistent, because that way the flow to your poem can defo be improved. For instance, the second line in the 3rd stanza is way too long! Your 4th stanza is a great example of how it should be done, and how good poetry flow sounds.
Another thing is the last line of the poem - there isn't really such a thing as 'own soltitude', soltitude is always on your own if you get what i mean. Try changing the line to something like 'and the wanderer is forced into dim soltitude'...Not necessarily that!
This is just me, but you might also want to change the word 'unfrequented' to something like 'desolate'...It has a more poetic ring to it i reckon.
Ok well, i did really like this and i don't mean to be harsh or something, just trying to help out!
Keep it up, i'll be back to read more soon

Jessica Danielle Hunt replies: "wow thanks for the criticism...im glad to have some of that. Of course i will say that when i wrote this i didnt know much about the art of poetry and just sort of wrote whatever came to mind not really focusing on iambic pentameter or anything in the liking. As for "unfrequented" i absolutely love that word because it isnt used too often. I like that you suggested desolate but the whole mood of the poem is really about confusion and sadness besides being alone and in a desolate place. But i really am glad you commented on it...some things definately need work but some things i meant to be that way...besides iambic pentameter and blah...but thank you bunches and ill stop by your place in the woods."