Elfwood is the worlds largest SciFi & Fantasy community.
  - 152371 members, 2 online now.
  - 12640 site visitors the last 24 hours.

 

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Jenessa ´Shadow´ David

"Night of the Silver Kiss" by Jenessa ´Shadow´ David

SciFi/Fantasy text 3 out of 5 by Jenessa ´Shadow´ David.      ←Previous - Next→
 
Tag As Favorite
 
This is a simple tale of how one is changed into one of the incredible nightstalkers known as vampires. After 'Eternity' was submitted to poetry.com and published, I was asked to submit another poem for another book of theirs, and this is what I sent them. Hopefully they will like this too. Just a quick note on the title because I have been asked about it in the past...for those of you who don't know, when a vampire bites someone, it is called either the Embrace or the Silver Kiss. I chose 'Night of the Silver Kiss' because I thought it would sound nice and mysterious. ^_^
Add Bookmark
Tag As FavoriteComment
←- Eternity | Tainted Angel -→

Cold arms hold me still, the Dead flesh as strong as stone

Body to body with a wild-eyed beauty

Too bewildered to cry out, too mystified to even fear

Muscles like steel, flesh like velvet, Touch like fire

Beautiful eyes draw mine, burning into my soul

A chilled breath floats past my neck

The press of fangs felt through the soft lips

Knees weak, body trembling

Then, the kiss, quick and sharp

Blissful pain, dizzyingly sweet

Vision explodes in stars, a private universe

My mouth filling suddenly with a sweet elixir

Drink hungrily, being held by a strong hand on my back

My hands find a wrist at my mouth and grasp it

Betrayed by gravity, my body falls

The arms release me, but I never hit the ground

←- Eternity | Tainted Angel -→

DateNameComment 
2 Apr 200245 Lilith
Interesting title, good subject, nice wording.

:-) Jenessa 'Shadow' David replies: "Thanks, danke, ringraziamenti, and remercie! Heh."
5 Nov 200245 Courtney
also, another website of mine is www.geocities.com/theanimatrix3000 OOOh! Not bad! lol, Im writing a vampire story myself! I was just searching around elfwood randomly, well, im not a very good speaker, so ill just shut up. This is the best part, by the way.. this is it.. "Daniel slid one finger up the small of Juliet's back, sending chills up her body. Taking the back of her head in one large and particularly cold hand, he kissed her gently, filling her with nervous bliss. Slowly he began to work his way down her pale neck, clills flying in sheets across her body, chest bursting with lustful yearnings, a sudden pain flowing through her neck, and suddenly, weakened, her young body collapsed. Daniel swallowed the thick, sweet nectar and cringed as his fangs painfully retracted." {here it is}
Not signed in, Add an anonymous comment to this guestbook...    

Your Name:
Your Mail:
   Private message? (Info)



'Night of the Silver Kiss':
 • Created by: :-) Jenessa ´Shadow´ David
 • Copyright: ©Jenessa ´Shadow´ David. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Bite, Change, Dying, Fangs, Kiss, Silver, Vampires
 • Views: 342

Bookmark and Share



More by 'Jenessa ´Shadow´ David':
Truly Hell
Crossings - Chapter One: Causes
Eternity
Tainted Angel

Related Tutorials:
  • 'Description, Dialogue, & Action' by :-)Jessica Barnes
  • 'Building Stronger Story Themes' by :-)Timothy Pontious
  • 'Creating an Original Character'
  • 'Originality in Fantasy - Taking The Road Less Travelled' by :-)A.R. George
  • Art Education Finder...
  •  
     

    Elfwood™ is a site for Fantasy and Science Fiction art and stories. The site was founded by Thomas Abrahamsson and is maintained by helpful assistants and moderators, owned by the Elfwood AB corporation.

    [More...]