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Jenna Rebecca Brager

"Rescue" by Jenna Rebecca Brager

SF&F Picture 5 out of 5 by Jenna Rebecca Brager
 
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This isn't my favorite poem, but it won $50. it's my femenist take on the generic faerie tale.
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Rescue

 

Sits in a tower

way up high,

Nothing to do

but sit and cry.

 

 Dragons guard

only door,
Fire breath

of ancient lore

 

Waiting for her

prince to come,

His good looks

will strike her dumb. 

 

Many will enter,

few will live,

Hot swift death,

dragons give.

 

Handsome knight

through battle slips, 

Up the stairs

staggers and trips.

 

Faster now

almost there,

Gallant youth

with not a care. 

 

Sudden halt

there she is,

Beautiful Princess

finally his.

 

Or so he thought. . .

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Clever Princess

stares at prince,

His dull manner

makes her wince. 

 

Perhaps my dream

was a lie,

Princess thought

with a sigh.

 

But with weak prince

Princess went, 

His fight was over

his strength spent. 

 

So mighty Princess

with a shout,

Shoved her so-called

true love out.

 

He faced the beast

sure to die,

no way to win

should he try. 

 

And Princess stole

his noble steed,

And rode away

with great speed. 

 

And as all stories end,

pain in the past,

She rode off towards the sun

free at last.

←- Anybody's in the Corner | A Faerie Queen -→

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8 Dec 200245 Squishycow
Definitely an interesting new take...Who awarded this $50 (just out of curiosity...)

:-) Jenna Rebecca Brager replies: "Thank you, I like my take, I got the 50 bucks from a literary magazine rum by my school last year. It made me happy. I bought music. yay."
11 Dec 200245 *Laura*
Ohhhhhhhhhhhh Jenna that was sooooooooo goood!!!!!!!!!! oooohhaaaa I wanna see more of ur great work! LOVE YA!

~Laurazzzz

:-) Jenna Rebecca Brager replies: "WHy does everyone do this? There must be some way I can improve. Bejeebus!"
5 Jan 200345 Amy
Jenna i always love that poem... It inspires me.(especially cuz it's not like anything else i've ever read)but sometimes i do feel bad for the dull prince. I mean it's not his fault he's dull...

:-) Jenna Rebecca Brager replies: "He is dull and it is his fault, I mean, he's like those boring preppy boys, they could have taken up an interesting hobby or learned to carry an intellegent convo.,they just didn't. I wish I could feed them to a dragon!"
10 Jan 2003:-) Rhiannon Dariyan Daymond-King
yay yay yay!!!! so good!!!! gonna show to my friends 1

:-) Jenna Rebecca Brager replies: "I'm glad you liked it, it was one of my first attempts at writing an upbeat poem. But is there something wrong with anything I've written? I need help!"
21 Jun 200445 Jwoolygirl
I think this is one of the most awesome poems I have ever read! Wish this was high school reading....

Great job, keep writing, and congratulations on a well earned $50.
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About 'Rescue':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Jenna Rebecca Brager
 • Copyright: ©Jenna Rebecca Brager. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Princess, Tower, Dragon, Battle, Love, Death, Freedom, Ride, Away
 • Categories: Dragons, Drakes, Wyverns, etc
 • Views: 132


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