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Jenny (Jeni) Watson

"Poem: Forever a Gypsy" by Jenny (Jeni) Watson

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I had to write a simile for my English class so i decided to write on The Gypsy and the Sword. Hope you like.
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Forever a Gypsy

The Sword is like a gypsy

It dances and it sings

Enchanting like a Dragon,

Its voice forever rings.

 

It's stubborn like the gypsies are,

And battles 'til its end.

Protecting like a guardian,

For its friends it will defend.

 

It sings a song like gypsies do,

And everyone knows its tale.

Exploring like a butterfly,

And never does it hail.

 

It's swift like the gypsies are.

Moving faster than the eyes,

Twirling like a pixie does,

Forever dancing 'til it dies.

 

Aiding others as the Gypsies do,

Mending the helpless hopeless heart.

Inspiring like a poet does,

Making things sweet what once was tart.

 

Unwanted as the Gypsies are,

Leaving each town after a show.

Determined as the knight who wields it,

Incessant 'til it kills its foe.

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25 Sep 2003:-) Amanda Leigh Johnson
Wow..........*Snaps back i to reality* That is beautiful! I never would have thought of that!Well, maybe I would have but now I can't *pouts* oh well. I certainly hope you get mods choice for this! It deserves it *Wanders off muttering about how she needs to becaome a better poet now...*

:-) Jenny (Jeni) Watson replies: "Yeah i hate when i see an idea that i wished i thought of... does that make sense? Lol. Anyways, i'm really glad you enjoyed this."
16 Oct 200345 Kathryn C. Parker
OKAY THAT'S IT I'M INSULTED! EVEDENTLY I'M NOT GOOD ENOUGH TO SEE THIS! OH I'M JUST KAT I'M JUST YOUR FRIEND I CAN SEE OTHER STUFF BUT NOT THIS! *growls and starts muttering uncontrolably about uncontrolable things*

:-) Jenny (Jeni) Watson replies: "Hi Kattie kat kat! I thought i did show you this!Besides ithought you were probably getting annoyed at my constant.... "Hey Kat read this for me, and tell me what you think..." i love ya. 1"
24 Oct 200345 Alyson Pavitt
sorry if i scared u, i can b kinda frightenin sumtimes, had 2 send another 1 just to make sure ur not thinkin of sending the men in white coats 2 find me *grins insanely~ just kidding*

aaw, here i go again, frightening people *hits self
"must be saner, must get sleep"* *trundles off muttering* Oh yeah, btw. Love this poem *grins*

:-) Jenny (Jeni) Watson replies: "The men in white coats... *shudder* I hate when they come to me, though it is rather fun ramming into the walls of those padded rooms, and straight jackets keep me warm..."
24 Oct 200345 Alyson Pavitt
Wooooooow *prolonged admiration* i do like this very very much. there is a lovely flow to it~ like gypsies. *growls at u for being a better poet than i am* *changes mind and hugs u 4 ur creativity and wonderful poetry*~ i need sleep without it i get cranky~ thus mixed up contents = a mixed up mind

2 Jenny (Jeni) Watson replies: "lol i understand. Its a love-hate relationship! 1 Thanks for commenting, and im glad you liked"
17 May 2004:-) Tasha-Ann N. Torres
Wow! Such vivid imagery! I like it! ^_^ Lovely!

:-) Jenny (Jeni) Watson replies: "Danke! I am proud that you enjoyed my piece. I need to find my way into your gallery one of these days. THanks so much for commenting. My next masterpiece... The Difference Between A Dragon and A Butterfly. *smirk*"
25 Nov 2004:-) E Purington
That's spiffy ^_^ I love similes, they's fun.
Couple o' things: "battle 'til its end" mayhaps "battle 'til the end"? Seems to roll off my tongue better or something.
"Making things sweet what once was tart." I think you could take out "things" if you wanted, it adds more poetism..or something that's actually a word.. heh heh.. yes
I don't mean to insult your poetry it's just so fantastic! The better something is the more picky I get, unfortunately. Those were the pickiest I can get ^_~

Very nice imagery! Lovely lovely all around
27 May 200845 Gypsy
May I use your poem in a blog posting with full credits to you of course. It was sent to me in a comment and would like your permission to post it otherwise I will not use it. I am a gypsy by birthright and I guess my friend was moved by your poem. I will check back for your reply. Thanks.
5 Aug 200945 Gypsy gal jayne x
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5 Aug 200945 Gypsy gal jayne x
hellooo can you write a poem for ma cuz martin please becuz he is ma best gypsy boy cuz xx
5 Jun 201045 Hellbunnie (that aint ma real name!!)
Ama- zin[COLOR- =0000F0][/color]g!!!!!!!!!!1 i sooooooooooooo wish i cud rit like dat!! *stares in uncontrolable amazment* WOW!!!
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'Poem: Forever a Gypsy':
 • Created by: :-) Jenny (Jeni) Watson
 • Copyright: ©Jenny (Jeni) Watson. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Compare, Gypsie, Gypsy, Jeni, Poem, Poetry, Rhyme, Rhyming, Simile, Sword, Watson
 • Categories: Elf / Elves, Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc., Mythical Creatures & Assorted Monsters, Parody
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