| 19 Apr 2003 |  Simon S. Pettersson |  Loading...Wow, this is great! The rhyming is very inconsistent, though. But that doesn't disturb me as much as it normally dues. Great job! I might make a "Poetry in the Woods" tour, and if I do, I'll be sure to include this one.  Jenny (Jeni) Watson replies: "kool, i might be part of a tour never would've thought any of my poems were decent enough for that. Yeah i was thinking about the rhyming and smootheness as well but as said i wrote this quickly and without thought of rhyming. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and ecstatic that you commented. Thank you. " | |
| 15 May 2003 |  Kylia A. *Pips* Taspin | Loading... Wow! Talent! I say "pah" to poetry, not because I don't enjoy reading it, but because I have been cursed to have been born with a lack of the poetry gene. I am being led to believe you somehow thieved it from me! Lol. This is very pretty, excellent sense of meter, and even though it is short and sweet, I found a lot of imagery called to the fore-front of my mind. I love anything that tells of the horrors of war, and I believe you just did that nicely. NEXT ONE!! ~~Kylia Jenny (Jeni) Watson replies: "Wow five comments! i feel so special. Anyways i'm glad you like. I should write another on war... hmm i need my muse... And no it was not I who stole from you. My dad passed his gift to me... but ya know my friend was taling about having stole someone's writing gift.... anyways yes im weird. lol. I'm really glad you enjoyed it! Doila lle! " | |
| 30 May 2003 |  Dylan Cline | Loading... Very good. You've got talent. Dylan Jenny (Jeni) Watson replies: "Thank you! I'm glad to see you think so... " | |
| 23 Jun 2003 |  Elizabeth Wilcox | Loading... great job! I can understand the three minute thing, too. All my best poem seem to take that long. . .  Jenny (Jeni) Watson replies: "Hmm.. my best reports are also best last minute... Maybe time ruins all? " | |
| 12 Aug 2003 |  Alison M. Petchauer | Loading... Very nice poem again. You have talent for sure. I am not good at judging poetry, but I believe yours in excellent. Keep writing. Jenny (Jeni) Watson replies: "Thank you! I will forever write poetry.. even if the whole world said it sucked... well at that point i might write it but i'll keep it to myself. lol" | |
| 28 Sep 2003 | Bryn Elizabeth Lepley | Loading... Oooo... you use a style of rhythm that I have never seen before! 6 line stanzas... very unique! I love the way that this is written! Your works are very good... sry if i only comment on this one! Please do tell me when you update! I would love to read more!  Jenny (Jeni) Watson replies: "Wow! I'm unique.  I will be sure to tell you when i update... thank you for taking time to comment." | |
| 17 May 2004 |  Tasha-Ann N. Torres | Loading... O.o very nice. I could never rhyme but you do it with such ease and might I say grace. Lovely! Although its sad but it was lovely. Good job! Jenny (Jeni) Watson replies: "I love rhyming. Strangely enough usually my mind makes up rhyming words before i even make up the story. Heh, tis strange this mind of mine. Anyways, i still have yet to figure out a rhyme for silver, or purple. Hmmm..." | |
| 25 Nov 2004 |  E Purington | Loading... Short and sweet. Very lovely.
One thing, though, is that the last line is missing a syllable, maybe a 'the hope'? Just a suggestion ^_^
Fantastic. Rhyming wasn't forced..it was very..Shel Sylverstein..or however you spell that guy's name
Wonderful | |
| 19 Jan 2005 |  Lindsay Rae Holder | Loading... Short sweet and powerfull...Reminds me of some of my work thanks for not glorifieing war. Go coment on some of my stuff now...Please? *prods* | |
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