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Jenny (Jeni) Watson

"Poem: Last Dragon" by Jenny (Jeni) Watson

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This came to me at different times. So it seems a bit choppy. Anyways my poor poor dragon Tony... *sniff*
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Last Dragon

Beaten torn and tattered, Thrown against the wall.

Everyone is waiting, For my last and final fall.

A lone candle struggles, As its light flickers out.

My hope is soon squandered, By the darkness that’s about.

Eyes were never friendly, Always hate filled, always cruel.

But now it seems they’re laughing, Like my sadness is their fuel.

 

Is this hatred neverending? Will I ever be free?

Or am I to live in hopelessness, Having nothing to believe.

Though I cannot give up easily, I will not cry in here.

I refuse to breakdown in this place, They will never see a tear.

 

Though years of pain and punishment, For being what I am.

Has brought me to dread each day, And dream about my damn.

For if I could change, What I am I would because.

I am the last of my species, None is left for me to love.

Im the last and the only, We soon shall be extinct.

For the reign of dragons has ended, Just as the setting sun doth sink.

 

Though I truly fear, I wont make it past this day,

Too strong is their hate towards me, I have one last thing to say.

I’m sorry I have Failed you brothers. I would have lasted longer,

But they know just how to break a heart, And against my will, their hate, is stronger.

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27 Jun 2003:-) Tarafae0
This is awesome. I really like how you wrote it.
Oh, and thank you very much for commenting on my poem.

^_^

12 Jenny (Jeni) Watson replies: "And thank you for commenting on mine. I'm so happy you liked it. "
16 Oct 200345 Kathryn C. Parker
Yeah I agree it's GREAT but with the something missing. I mean I have seen it before but not this version. I think I have seen one of the first ones dunno

:-) Jenny (Jeni) Watson replies: "-hmm. Im glad you like Kat! And danke for commenting. One day i would learn whats missing. Maybe when i turn into a dragon"
17 May 2004:-) Tasha-Ann N. Torres
*tear* That was so sad! *sniffle* So touching! Damn humans! *tear* Poor dragon! Lovely poem! I love it! ...looks again..there does seem to be something missing...I can't figure it out! *screams* Thats ok it was still ultra good!

:-) Jenny (Jeni) Watson replies: "I think i have figured it out. Mwahaha. Hopefully i will rewrite it soon and then post the new improved version. "
26 Jun 200445 Addy Hicks
I love it sooooooooo much!!! But i do feel sorry for the
dragon. The poem touched me.

:-) Jenny (Jeni) Watson replies: "Hurray! Thank you for your words."
26 Jun 200445 Addy Hicks
I love it sooooooooo much!!! But i do feal sorry for the
dragon. The poem touched me.

:-) Jenny (Jeni) Watson replies: "Aaah. I'm glad it did. Thanks for commenting."
1 Nov 2004:-) Kris M. Benoit
WOW. just. . .wow. that's incredible. when my gallery finally gets up here, you should check out my humble workings. I love dragons too!

:-) Jenny (Jeni) Watson replies: "I will be sure to view your gallery some time by Monday. Tis a promise my fellow dragonsoul."
19 Jan 2005:-) Lindsay Rae Holder
NO!!!! hate can't win! it just can't! Don't give up Tony...please? for the sake of all dragon lovers and anyone that cares for whats right don't give up!TO ALL OTHER READERS HEAR THIS:FIGHTING LIFE SUCKS BUT TO LIE DOWN AND DIE IS EVEN WORSE...i know it's just a poem but you are the last you there will ever be.
5 Aug 200645 Lavendersdouble
Whoa me like.Sad but beautiful.Will there (is there?)be more?Hope so i love dragons too much to see them killed off *stands ready to die before the dragon*
dragons are never alone and never shall be so long as im alive.
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'Poem: Last Dragon':
 • Created by: :-) Jenny (Jeni) Watson
 • Copyright: ©Jenny (Jeni) Watson. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Dragon, Dying, Hero, Jeni, Poem, Poetry, Rhyme, Rhyming, Watson
 • Categories: Dragons, Drakes, Wyverns, etc, Romance, Emotion, Love, Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic
 • Views: 411

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