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"Poem: Murderous Disbelief" by Jenny (Jeni) Watson

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A quick poem i wrote about human nature as a whole. There is an overall symbolism in there though i'm not sure if you'll catch it right away.
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Innocence is Lost,
While the Evil Reign Supreme.
Everyone is Blinded,
By the Darkness thatís Unseen.

A small little Child,
Who's major Faults are Few.
Finally sees the Evil,
and tells the Others what he Knew.

But before he got a Word out,
Before he had a Chance to Fight.
He was Beaten to the Ground,
And murdered in the Night.

He was Slaughtered like an Animal,
Dying, bruised, and Bleeding.
Blamed to be some Fearsome Beast,
Though he died Crying and Pleading.

For the thing He spoke was Crazy,
They wished not to Believe.
That the Beast that they were fearing,
Was just Themselves Deceived....

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12 Aug 200345 Alison M. Petchauer
WOW! A+++ work. I see the message here, or at least a message that came to me when I was reading. I think the message is that all people have different opinions. GREAT POEM.

21 Jenny (Jeni) Watson replies: "wow A ++++ i feel like one of those smart kids... heh. Glad you liked and im especially happy you found a message in it and not just a bunch of pretty words. "
17 May 2004:-) Tasha-Ann N. Torres
Wow! Incredible! I'm pretty sure I got 'a' message but I don't know if it is the one that you were trying to say. Very good poem! You should get some sort of award for this. Very nice!

:-) Jenny (Jeni) Watson replies: "Well "A" message is perfect. People view different things when they stare at the same picture. Should go the same with poetry right? Right."
18 Sep 2004:-) E Purington
Powerful. I love poems that can be analyzed, and this one screamed at me. Although the screaming was a bit incoherent, I am pretty sure I understand.
//A small little Child// is a very good line, it shows innocence, however, it is repetitive, //small little//
Just something to ponder ^_^
I see this is old by the first comment. Very nice rhymes, but the rhythm was a tad jarring in..the second stanza, I think. Very good poem.
So sad
Cheers

:-) Jenny (Jeni) Watson replies: "Thank you. I see a few errors in it myself now that i look back on it. Thanks again for your advice, and im glad you enjoyed it at least. "
4 Feb 200845 Wolfman
In the end darkness will consume all of human kindness.
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'Poem: Murderous Disbelief':
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