|12 Aug 2003|| Alison M. Petchauer|
WOW! A+++ work. I see the message here, or at least a message that came to me when I was reading. I think the message is that all people have different opinions. GREAT POEM. Jenny (Jeni) Watson
replies: "wow A ++++ i feel like one of those smart kids... heh. Glad you liked and im especially happy you found a message in it and not just a bunch of pretty words. "
|17 May 2004|| Tasha-Ann N. Torres|
Wow! Incredible! I'm pretty sure I got 'a' message but I don't know if it is the one that you were trying to say. Very good poem! You should get some sort of award for this. Very nice! Jenny (Jeni) Watson
replies: "Well "A" message is perfect. People view different things when they stare at the same picture. Should go the same with poetry right? Right."
|18 Sep 2004|| E Purington|
Powerful. I love poems that can be analyzed, and this one screamed at me. Although the screaming was a bit incoherent, I am pretty sure I understand.
//A small little Child// is a very good line, it shows innocence, however, it is repetitive, //small little//
Just something to ponder ^_^
I see this is old by the first comment. Very nice rhymes, but the rhythm was a tad jarring in..the second stanza, I think. Very good poem.
Cheers Jenny (Jeni) Watson
replies: "Thank you. I see a few errors in it myself now that i look back on it. Thanks again for your advice, and im glad you enjoyed it at least. "
|4 Feb 2008|| Wolfman|
In the end darkness will consume all of human kindness.