|16 Oct 2003|| Kathryn C. Parker|
Hmmm Mysticee....why does that sound familur? *grins* Jenny (Jeni) Watson
replies: "hmm i dunno... maybe its a cereal.. *grin*"
|12 Apr 2004|| Karin Schadinger|
I love that poem! It's great. Your rhyming is fantastic!! Jenny (Jeni) Watson
replies: "Thank you! I am glad you enjoy my rhyming style and the overall theme of the poem. "
|18 Sep 2004|| E Purington|
Ooooh, very nice. Your poems are so fun to read! This is the second one I have read, but it was very good!
//than you lost again// than you're?
//aint// is a very modern slang, so it was a bit off with the rest of the poem.
Other then those two minor things, I really liked it. I see that your library is mostly composed of poems; very neat. Poems are so insightful and unique, I love seeing poets on Elfwood.
Cheers Jenny (Jeni) Watson
replies: "hurray, another person fond of poets. Lol, yeah and thanks for bringing up the ain't.. i suppose that is very bad colloquial-ness. lol. I have to change that right away. And shame on everyone else who didnt catch my typo!!"