Two good pieces of writing. I think you should maybe write a longer piece. Like a story or Novella. Try to work more on setting though. It sort of lost me where the events were taking place. However You still have a long way to go. WELCOME TO ELFWOOD! *gives him a chocobo doll* enjoy.
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