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"Silver Star" by Amanda J. Hoffman

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Actually, this is just a play on words. I had an idea one night that I should write a parody to 'Twinkle Twinkle Little Star' and this is what I came up with.
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Silver Star



Silver star of the night,

Forever in a sea of flight.

Infatuated with the sky,

Forever and always wondering why.



I look towards the heavens,

And what hither do I see?

I see not sixes nor sevens but

A silver star flying over me.



So protective yet deviant,

It softens my hardened heart.

Wandering lightly and never grievant

My star whispers, "We'll ne'er part."



My sweet, illustrious, Silver Star,

You make my soul leap.

I'll always love you from afar,

And dream of you in my sleep.



Oh, soft, twinkle, Silver Star,

Wander aimlessly no more.

Your sea of black was ne'er marred,

And the questions were implored.



Silver star of the night,

Forever in a sea of flight.

Do not wander aimlessly through the sky,

And tell this heart your faithful lies.
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9 Mar 2002:-) Kathryn E. Castle
Oh, that's so pretty! Sounds exactly like something you'd wanna sing to your kid! (is that good or bad, lol!?)
I like the idea behind it tooo! *is happy* Now I'm off to read the rest of your writing.
See, that random story thingarajig really turns up some gems sometime ^_^ wooH!
6 Feb 2003:-) Helen Pye
Would have to agree that the random story dice roll up some good stuff. 2
Really like this take - managed to keep the shape and stuff well. It all works like a nursery rhyme should.
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'Silver Star':
 • Created by: :-) Amanda J. Hoffman
 • Copyright: ©Amanda J. Hoffman. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Interest, Lies, Love, Silver, Star
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