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Jessica Lea Walls

"Stark Naked" by Jessica Lea Walls

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      She stood there. Water dripped to the bottom of the bath tub and played around her toes before traveling to the drain. Her exposed, curved body was flushed with the strain of being pounded with hot water. Supple lips quivered slightly due to a sudden chill and she drew her towel to her face. Drying the remains of her shower, she looked at the dewdrops left over on her freckled arms. The curtain had already been pulled back. She couldn't move.

      Her mind was some place else as she thought, 'I think I've been loving him...for the past eight months. That's why this doesn't hurt.'

      A slender leg stepped out of the white tub. Wrapping herself in her towel, her hair then swirled up in another. With a streak of her hand, the mirror was wiped and she stared at herself. The reflection of her blue ovals was fading fast as the glass started to fog up again. Her fingers slipped down and drew lines across the picture of her lips.
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17 Oct 200145 Allison Nicole Pottern
This is beautiful and some how really speaks to me... i'm not sure what it is. The imagery is stunning. Thank you.
30 Mar 200245 Anonymous
This story relates to me on so many levels. It's so, so true.
13 Apr 200445 Sami
The scene you portrayed on this poem was all to familiar to me. I have noticed that many of the poems you write seem to come from life experiences well some of them certainly could come from mine. Once again great job. =)
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'Stark Naked':
 • Created by: :-) Jessica Lea Walls
 • Copyright: ©Jessica Lea Walls. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Mirror, Naked, Reflection, Shower, Tub
 • Categories: Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc.
 • Views: 1300

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