"Rude Awakening" by Jessiqa Greenblatt

WHOO!! first comment.. well its a cool drawing.. but i think the arm is too shoer.. other than that..oh! and good facial expression....the arm really messes it up..the rest is otay

I was trying to go for a slight hint of foreshortening, since the arm is at a diagonal to our eyes... I guess it didn't work. Oh well.

Frankly, I disagree with the first comment! Since you mentioned that you were using foreshortening, I can see now what you intended; the arm is coming -across- his body and upwards, not just upwards. In that case, it's perfectly done! The only qualm I have with this work is the presence of the sweatdrop; from my experiance in anime (which, yanno, may not be extensive as yours; if so, just punch me! ^^) isn't really used for actual sweat. It's more of an expression of disbelief, confusion, or frustration. Damien actually looks like he's in -pain-, making it seem out of place. Anyway, continue drawing, and continue with your style — it's fantastic! I'm jealous ^^

Don't listen to them! Don't listen to them! The sweatdrop is PERFECT! ^.^ \./ I like Damien. can I take him home with me? And, the sweatdrop, since it DOES have multiple meanings, is fine. you;re wonderful don't stop drawing! You're a better drawer than me by far, which is why I stick to writing.