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I got the inspiration for this about fifteen minutes before my final Psychology exam. Which proves that inspiration has no concept of timing whatsoever. This is a villanelle, like the famous poem Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night, By Dylan Thomas (which, if you haven't read, you really really should). As for mine, I think it can be improved upon. Any suggestions welcome, even really random ones. Oh and one more interesting thing I noticed, while seeking help from an online rhyming dictionary, this might not rhyme so well if you don't have an English accent...eheh...let me know, I'm interested! |
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It lurks where we won’t go, beneath the lake;
The beast of Ashmore’s spoken of in awe:
Just one sole thing can make the monster quake.
Ashmore Lake’s a tomb of man’s mistake,
Lined with thick black mud that will not thaw;
It lurks where we won’t go, beneath the lake.
I heard it looks horrendous, half-awake,
With pitted sweating skin and swollen jaw;
Just one sole thing can make the monster quake.
It leaves it’s carrion reeking in it’s wake;
Old bones litter cave and forest floor;
It lurks where we won’t go, beneath the lake.
But still it fears one thing it cannot break;
One spirit that won’t waver or withdraw:
Just one sole thing can make the monster quake.
No foe more wild than Man could this beast make;
So fears the human race - no less, no more;
It hides where we won’t go, beneath the lake;
Just one sole thing can make the monster quake.
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