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Jennifer H. Berry (A shadow of the night)

"The Legend of Night Shadow" by Jennifer H. Berry (A shadow of the night)

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When I was travelling about the Lands of Aldálon (my fantasy world, see map in my Elfwood art gallery) I heard many variations of this but they are mostly the same. This version was one told by a storyteller named Kifesh who lives in Florasia.
Illustration to this legend is now up in my art gallery. Click here to see!
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Once, a long long time ago, when the elements of the world had a life of their own and controlled the forces of the lands. A time when there were only the four great races. A time when wizards and sorcerers battled battles that could change forest to desert with a mere thought. There was a magician named Grakadyic, one of the most powerful.
    No creature of the magics at that time was satisfied with what they had, and Grak was no exception. He sought to increase his domain; he sought to rule the world.
    He took all the magic around him and it wasn't enough, he stole magic form others and it wasn't enough. If he was to accomplish his dream he would need more, more.
    Then he discovered the power of the shadows, a power never before known of, never before harnessed. He drew that power to him, the friction produced was enormous but Grak withstood it, as all others paused to watch. He pulled the power and trapped it within a stone, locking it away. Now he had his power, as much as he could ever want.
    For 50 years he increased his domain, battling others that must give way before him. He was so close to his dream.
    But Grak, for all his power, was still human. Humans cannot live forever. Grak, so caught up in the drug of power would not acknowledge his old age, his weakening. He was playing with powers he didn't understand, he made mistakes. One mistake caused a backlash of power; his weakening body could not contain it. And so the great Grakadyic fell, as all mortals must. But with his dying breath he vowed his fight would not be in vain and he passed the great shadow stone to his only son, who was magicless, seeming magic did not travel by blood.
    But his son could not use the stone. The forces where too great, he did not have the power necessary to control it. He attempted to call its power, not knowing this. The power was unleashed, but not controlled. The shadows broke free and the stone shattered in his hand. Caught in the centre of the magic storm, the backlash should have killed him, and the power of the shadows should have returned to what it had been.
    But the power of the shadows where now concentrated in one place, they could not dissipate quickly enough. That much magic in one place needs to earth itself
    It earthed itself through Grak's son, whose name is not known.
    It changed him.
    Mutating him.
    Creating a creature of the night.
    A creature who controlled shadows.
    A creature known ever after as...

Night Shadow

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17 Mar 2004:-) Jamie Foley
Well, it sounds like you're beginning something here, though I'm not sure what cause there isn't much up. Sounds interesting, or at least intreguing. Perhaps you are looking for comments on whether or not to continue? If you like it enough to write this much, but don't trust yourself enough to answer the question on your own I would be worried. But I'll help reassure you. Sounds like a good start, and it could be very interesting if you continued tormenting the poor kid =)

Good luck!

:-) Jennifer H. Berry (A shadow of the night) replies: "Thanx, I don't think i'll stop writing but I hardly ever have the time. I've started to write a book, only I'm too scared to put the bit i've done up here, even though the chances of people stealing my ideas aren't that high..."
18 Mar 2004:-) Suzannah Carrick
Wowness!!!
Should be continued.
CC: Bit too repetitive toward the beginning, seems like loads of information just put down and not weaved into the story.
I like it though, it's an amazing idea, imaginative, original etc. Nice vocab too
(SooZle)

:-) Jennifer H. Berry (A shadow of the night) replies: "Tah. It waz kinda like that, I just had an idea and scribbled it down. As for it being continued...Night Shadow is a character in my book..."
23 Mar 2004:-) James Tsatsaronis
A nice concept I spose, if I may make a suggestion however is that making the words "Night Shadow" at the end big and bold and all that sorta makes it look a bit juvenile, comic-bookish. You are free to ignore if you want because it's only my opinion

21 Jennifer H. Berry (A shadow of the night) replies: "you're probably right...it was just an idea, i never really expected it to amount to anything anyway. Obviously if I was to put it into my book I wouldn't do that."
22 Jul 2004:-) Elisabeth Jones
That must be painful... What can these shadows do?

10 Jennifer H. Berry (A shadow of the night) replies: "yup, lol. That's another story... hehe"
7 May 2009:-) Jane Ara Mackie
i realy like it lol
i find it quite believable

:-) Jennifer H. Berry (A shadow of the night) replies: "thanks"
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'The Legend of Night Shadow':
 • Created by: :-) Jennifer H. Berry (A shadow of the night)
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 • Keywords: Grak, Legend, Night, Shadow
 • Categories: Fights, Duels, Battles, Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc., Wizards, Priests, Druids, Sorcerers...
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