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"Foresight: An Interview" by Jamie Foley

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This is an interview with a character who can see the future and describes what she does with that knowledge.
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Foresight: An interview

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            “It’s simple really,” she explained in a voice devoid of emotion, “seeing the future I mean.  It’s really not very difficult at all.  We can all anticipate where something is going, what ends certain people must have.  Haven’t we all seen the tragic poet enough for that?”

            “Don’t you feel your stereotyping?”

            “Not particularly, though I can see how you might take it that way,” she shrugged.  “I’m actually trying to make the process understandable.  Really, that’s the most difficult part.  It isn’t the actual viewing but really understanding what you’re seeing that’s key.  Once you figure that out it’s easy for anyone.”

            “Are you saying that anyone can see the future then?”

            “No.”  The answer was abrupt and there was a pause after it as the young woman looked out the window into the clouded sky.  “No, certainly not.  If anyone could do it, then it would only be natural that everyone would do it.  I suppose I’m just not being very clear, but you must understand it’s difficult to explain something which is by nature unexplainable.”

            “Of course, of course,” accompanied by an understanding nod.  And of course, there was no real understanding.

            “What I mean is that to some extent the future is expected, so anyone can come to guess with a certain probability what is to come.  What makes this an art is decreasing the probability that other events will occur.  Though the future is dominated by the actions of each person, there are certain actions which can limit others.”

            “I’m not sure I understand.”

            She considered, then smiled.  “Given your history, the type of person you are and so forth there are many different things you could do in the next few moments.  If I continue to speak, the probability is extremely high you will continue to listen, and if I pause you might wait or ask a question.  However, what if I suddenly attempted to strike you?  The probability is very, very high that you will react in a defensive fashion.  My action would then have determined your future reaction.”

            “Alright, but you couldn’t be sure I would react in that fashion.  I might not be paying attention and then not notice you were going to hit me.  Then I would have no reaction at all.”

            “That’s certainly one of the strings.”

            “Strings?”

            “Aw, that’s what I call the possible futures.  At times there are uncountable numbers of them, while at other times there are very few.”

            “By few, how many do you mean?”

            “Um…” she considered, “usually under a thousand.”

            Incredulous.  “A few is a thousand?”

            “Well you have to understand that usually there are predominant strings which push the rest to the background.  These are the strings that are most likely to occur.  So usually I only focus on those at the very forefront of my view, though there are many others which I might attempt to bring about.”

            “And do all these strings centre around you as the viewer?”

            She paused.  “This is also hard to explain, so maybe you’ll understand and maybe you wont, but each string connects me to every other object in the universe.  You really have to have an open mind to view the future, to understand that everything is interconnected in some fashion or another.  In addition, I don’t see this future as a movie that occurs in sequence.  That would be much too slow, we can’t follow events like that at a speed that would allow the near-instantaneous understanding which I encounter.  Rather it’s more of a colleague with an implied order.  I’m always in the picture, but so is everything else.”

            “But wouldn’t that be enormous?”

            “Oh absolutely.  It’s a size beyond comprehension, and multi-layered as well!”

            “Then how can you see it all at once?”

            “Well, just like the strings I don’t focus on all the pictures.  Usually I only examine those which dominate the colleague.”

            “Aw, I see.”  Not really.  “But I suppose the big question is what do you do if you really can see the future?”

            “Well, that’s what brought about all this attention, isn’t it?  How useful is it?”

            “It’s certainly made you a fortune on the stock market, didn’t it?”

            She shrugged.  “I did the research as well, I didn’t entirely depend on my foresight.”

            “But you have depended on it in other cases, if I’m not mistaken.”

            She grinned wolfishly.  “Yes, for years.  Would you believe I’ve never once gotten less than perfect on an exam?  I had this system where I would write the exam as quickly as possible, usually finishing in ten minutes.  Then, I would take the exam forward to when it was handed back and see all the errors I made.  From there it was just a matter of rewriting the exam with all the correct answers,” she shrugged and tossed her hair.  “It was a system as perfect as my final grade.”

            “So then why did you drop out of university?” the interviewer persisted.

            She smiled.  “University teaches a method by which one can live.  I didn’t need that, so I didn’t see the purpose in staying.  The fact is, all my life I’ve had the chance to learn exactly what I’ve wanted and not worry about that which I was uninterested in.  I see myself as well rounded, extremely well read, and I have an understanding of current events which extends beyond that of almost any other person.  I don’t see what I missed,” she finished with a small laugh.

            “So you don’t see your life as deceitful?”

            “No.  It would be if I didn’t use my gift, like pretending I couldn’t speak a foreign language when I really could.  Each person has an advantage in life of some fashion, foresight is mine.”

            “But yet the answers on those exams weren’t yours, were they?  You didn’t go through classes the way students normally do.”

            “Each person moves through life differently.  This is my way, and I couldn’t imagine living any other way.”

            “And what are your plans in the long run?”

            “I’m horrible at long run planning, honestly.  I can see so many possibilities it’s almost impossible for me to plan to follow any one of them.  I do enjoy the relatively short run though.  Right now I’m writing a book on the history of political uprisings.”

            “History?  I would have thought you’d be writing about the future, not the past.”

            “Naw.  As soon as you start writing about what’s suppose to happen it starts changing rather radically.  Especially if it deals with a wider and wider range of people.  The fact is, the permanent nature of the book ensure that it only retains value in the telling of events which have already transpired.  Those yet to come it can only be implied but not spoken of with any degree of surety.  In addition, as a student of the future I constantly see the errors of the past repeated.  If I could write a book which touched enough people, made them understand the value of the past, perhaps these mistakes might not continue to occur.”

            A pause.  “When you say ‘if I could write a book which touched enough people’, you mean that you’re writing this book with each word drawn on the future knowledge of how successful it will be, don’t you?”

            “Yes.”

            “It sounds like you’re playing God.”

            “No, God’s playing with me.  It’s the will of one beyond myself who endows each of us with a gift to lead the world.  Some take the chance and stand, and others hold the gift to their hearts and follow in breathless awe.  I’m trying to lead, but really I’ve done very little so far.  It’s what to come that I’m best at.”

            “Aw yes, foresight.”

            “Yes, foresight,” she whispered, smiling secretively. 

            “And just one last question: what dominates this moment?”

            A glance out the window once more.  Rain had marked the glass.  “I see a storm of butterflies with clipped wings,” she replied cryptically, rising to her feet.  “The outcomes of their efforts are beyond a simple statement, so I suppose you’ll just have to wait for the future to arrive in its own time.”

            “No probabilities? No stock watches?”

            “Just a reminder.  The future is based on probabilities which are dictated by our own actions, so there are no sureties.  As such, we are the designers of our own lives.”

            Trying to catch her before she left.  “And what will you do now?”

            “Now?”  A laugh over the shoulder.  “I suppose I’ll go make another fortune in options trading,” she shrugged.  “Oh, and finish my best-selling book.  I hope you’ll read it, it’ll stay at number one for thirty full weeks.”

            “Probably,” was added.

            A haughty laugh.  “Sure,” she replied, closing the door of the interview room.    

 

FINALE

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1 Apr 2004:-) Ute Fuerst
Almost as mind-bending as trying to write about a paradoxon.
I'm surprised this one has no comments yet.
I like the way the character is portrayed in her self-certain way, while at the same time remaining true to the fact that there is not certain future, only probabilities.
What I find a little ... sad, is that she uses her gift to make a fortune. Or ... hmm, well hard to explain, but she uses that power, and by doing so her actions may mean the death of certain companies... etc. But if that is morally wrong is hard to say. It just bugged me a bit.
Nice work on a complicated topic. 2

1 Jamie Foley replies: "lol...you're comment made me laugh for some reason =) I find it very interesting, being able to see the future. I suppose it's because that's a rough description of what I study in economics. We try to forcast everyday, and you know I really wish that I could have a cut-and-dry solution rather than all these probabilities! I'm glad you liked this though, I wrote it up on a sunny afternoon a few months ago and was needing opinions. "
14 Apr 2004:-) Marijke Mahieu
A very original and interesting idea...although it was indeed a bit complicated. But then again, I would never even attempt to write anything like this, cause I just know it would be bad. The form, the interview, is perfect for this story. I could almost imagine watching this in a tv program 12. And I also like the fact that you didn't go for the prototypical "seer" figure (you know, with their glass balls, long robes, lots of bead necklaces..hehe), but decided to describe this very down-to-earth woman who tries to get the most out of her "gift", even if that means making a fortune 2...well done, great piece!
Eli

2 Jamie Foley replies: "AW! I can't help it! You know, in economics I spend all day(and most nights) attempting to forecast the future and tell exactly where a bond market is gonna end up, or what the implications of a change in the money supply will be on future prices. I always thought it would be nice if I just knew. It would be wonderful! This was sort of an outlet for many frustrations one day when my calculations weren't coming up with the right results...if only it were so easy for me to push away the plastic globe and aspiring spellbooks and come up with such clear answers!"
21 May 200445 Jennifer L. Martin
This is great! I love how she's unselfconsciously arrogant about her talent. Certainly, everyone believes that everyone else's advantages are unfair, and I think it's very insightful that she recognizes that. I spent the story trying to think of her motive for revealing herself, but then I decided that she'd already be aware of any negative outcomes. ^_^

A few little picks:

* “Don’t you feel (your) stereotyping?”* s/b (you're)

*“Aw, that’s what I call the possible futures.* 'Aw' is struck me as an odd hesitator to put in here. The only time it's really used in English is 'Awww...shucks, you caught me'. Is that how you mean it?

*Rather it’s more of a colleague with an implied order.* Do you mean collage? A colleague is a co-worker.

2 Jamie Foley replies: "Good points, Jennifer! Appreciate the time you took to point them out to me! Honestly, this was a pretty quick piece I wrote as I was trying to clarify something for another story I had in mind and decided to do it in dialogue form. Still, any ideas of tweeking or outright mistakes are always welcome to be pointed out. Sometimes it's hard to see mistakes when we're so familiar with a piece. =)"
30 Jun 2004:-) Charly Strawberry
Hey! I'm BACK!

I really liked this. I don't know why but for some reason I found it a really bizarre idea. For a good while I was thinking, "Aaah! What?! AN INTERVIEW?! An interview as a STORY?! What--?!" - But I really enjoyed it and it worked well. I thought it was cool how the character of the main woman was very simple. You didn't seem to give her any huge characteristics so it was hard to imagine her, and the description was really minimal aside from speech. I really liked that. I think a lot of the things that I've mentioned can either go one way or the other - Really ruin or make the piece of writing. And obviously it worked pretty well for you. ^^

I noticed a couple of typos but I've forgotten them. I remember I think there was a 'the' missing before the word 'key' near the beginning. But I don't remember the other one. Rrrr. Sorry.

But yeah, well done! It was really interesting and made me think. And I'll probably think about it some more when I'm not reading it, which is always good! My thumbs are up for you. Woo woo woo.

:-) Jamie Foley replies: "Wow! Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I like taking on a few different styles and seeing how they work--helps when I want to add such things to longer pieces to know the power of them. "
11 Jul 200445 John 'Cymru' Bagwell
Most ... interesting.
Personally, I don't see any 'moral' problem with her using her abilities to get rich, like she said, "Each person has their advantages"
One thing, 'Aw' pops up a few times. It might just be a regional thing, but personally, I think 'Ah', like changing "Aw, I see" to "Ah, I see"

:-) Jamie Foley replies: "Ah! Thank you! And someone else who appreciates moral issues properly - I think in economics terms since that's what I study, and I really see this as an issue of Opportunity Cost. My character is only choosing what is rational for her first. =)"
10 Nov 2004:-) Meghan Brownjohn
Again you astound me with your ideas, fresh and original. I'm impressed by your level of understanding in life and other matters. thank you for writing such loveable stories. =) good job, good job.

:-) Jamie Foley replies: "Wow! Understanding?? I think that's what I lack. Half the time I find myself writing just so I can try and figure out what's going on. There are so many questions I want to ask, so many things that I can't answer. Writing really helps overcome that; helps make the real world clearer. That's partially why I write the way I do. Perhaps the other half is that I read way too much literature... =) It's all very good though!"
2 Oct 2005:-) Zania Marais
I read this a while back (after you just commented on my site ;P) but I think I might have forgotten to comment. *cough* So here it is...

I really enjoyed it... it was different. It reminded me in a way of 'Interview with a Vampire' (maybe it was the 'interview' part heh). No but seriously you must have put a lot of thought into it. You managed to portray difficult concepts and make, I don't know, more understandable. Even in such a short piece you managed to build a well fleshed out character for her.

Congratulations!

:-) Jamie Foley replies: "Wow! Thank you so much for the compliments! I'm always so glad to get comments on my pieces, and to be compared to Anne Rice is also very nice (she writes wonderfully in first person, I think!).

As for the piece, I honestly didn't spend as much time as I should have, though I like how it came out. I'm working on something much more interesting now, though it's taking a bit longer than expected to finish. I suppose it all evens out in the end.

Thanks anways, and good luck on your own work! Let me know when you have more of the dragon-story out!"
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'Foresight: An Interview':
 • Created by: :-) Jamie Foley
 • Copyright: ©Jamie Foley. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Character, Events, Exams, Future, Questions, Rain, Reports
 • Categories: Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc., Urban Fantasy and/or Cyberpunk
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