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James K. Bowers

"Dragonbane (poem) Part 2" by James K. Bowers

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Dragonbane was written in 1994 and was published in Kankakee Community College's 'The Prairie Fire' anthology in 1995. It is the contiunation of the tragedy begun in 'Ice Dragon'. Please visit Tansy A. H. Pye in Lothlorien to see her illustration of the Ice Dragon...
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←- Deathbird's Song (poem) | Ice Dragon (poem) Part 1 -→
Dragonbane

'Tis sung in minstrel's ballads in bittersweet refrains —
  Grim rime born of Fortune's jest — the Song of Dragonbane:
Once bathed in regal splendours, the castle stood in pride,
  But now just lay abandoned, all cares and hopes denied.
No monks pray in the chapel, no criers mark the hours.
  No merchants fill the market square, no archers man the towers.
Gone the lowly chambermaids, the deacons and the lords;
  Gone, too, the maids-in-waiting and knights with shining swords.
Away have fled the armigers, the stewards and the squires;
  The bailey stands unguarded, no pennants grace the spires.
The smithy's forge knows not flame; the wellsprings all are dry;
  No hearthfires fend December; no gardens greet July.
No torches brighten chambers, nor light forgotten halls;
  Winds moan their hollow dirges past cracked and tumbled walls.
The emptiness resounding screams sadness all the more,
  For the innocence of youth is now Misfortune's whore.
Deep within the mould'ring keep, 'midst the ruin and the dust,
  Rests the blade of blackest lore, now cloaked in sanguine rust.
Once proudly borne in battle, this sword did glory gain,
  Before men knew its secrets and named it Dragonbane.
Know this sword is more than steel, and wrought by more than fire.
  Know, too, this sword is heartless, with death its lone desire.
Its soul arose and wakened from hauteur and from spite,
  From magics gleaned from dragon's blood, from ice, and winter night.
A maiden's heart, a fallen tear, a warrior's iron nerves —
  Victims of the hell-forged blade to feed the curse it serves.
By this sword was Honor slain, then Faith and Gallantry;
  And struck dead in the carnage, lay golden Chivalry.
So fled bold knights and heroes, far from the frightful spawn,
  Seeking solace from the distance of elsewhen's brighter dawn.
Though dream some fools and reavers, of power, wealth, and fame,
  Not one dares venture northward, the blacksouled sword to claim,
For there within the castle walls, an old man struggles still
  To break the spell of evil, his destiny to fill.
Within the hall of feasting, now open to the sky,
  He stands in silent vigil, unmoved as time goes by.
He watches o'er the maiden, her lifeless form now bone,
  Beside the sword so dreadful, upon the timeworn stone.
Days pass by and so, too, nights, and seasons become years;
  He kneels, he whispers gently, and sheds his somber tears.
His breath is short and labored, his sinews stiff and weak;
  His bones are old and brittle, mere memories of his peak.
Against the Curse alone he stands, beneath grey-shrouded skies,
  And wields his sword of promise, of hope, and summer sighs.
His armor is his courage, his shield his heart of glass,
  Yet though he battles bravely, he cannot change his past.
Some say on lonely winter nights, when all is cold and clear,
  The warrior, old and feeble, sobs prayers through sorrow's tears,
And when perchance he listens, he hears a dragon's roar —
  From long ago it echoes to touch his heart once more.
It brings him grief and sorrow, and heralds fitful sleep,
  With dreams of errant ventures and of this woeful keep:
He finds himself much younger, much stronger, yet unwise,
  And cannot end the nightmare, no matter how he tries.
He dreams of knighthood questing, and vanquishing a foe.
  He dreams of knighthood dying that night so long ago.
In slumber's dark embracing, he journeys back those years
  To fight again the dragon, to shed again his tears.
He feels his sword strike cleanly; he hears her dying breath;
  He sees the truth now clearly: 'twas he who welcomed death.
He holds again the maiden, and brushes back her hair,
  Again he begs the angels her life to somehow spare.
Then from the dream he wakens, and stares across the room;
  There he sees no miracle to free him from this doom.
Within her cave of crystal, her lair of evergleams,
  Nevermore will dragon sleep — his sundered spirit screams:
"Weep not, O fair young maidens, shed not your tears in vain.
  Pity not this tortured soul who wielded Dragonbane..."
                                                - James Kevin Bowers
←- Deathbird's Song (poem) | Ice Dragon (poem) Part 1 -→

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31 May 2003:-) H. Lynn Rummel
Excellent! Your poetry is so..... PERFECT! the poor knight guy....
Again, your mastery of emotion is nothing less than flawless! I am in awe.
9 Jun 200345 Stephanie Billips
I enjoy James' work. I had the opportunity to be published with him in Prairie Fire in 1995. I had the honor of editing his work, and I can say he has remained true to form, and the result is beautiful yet again. I am writing my own work now and can be found at poetry.com Thanx, Stephanie... Nice to know some 'locals' are browsing through the Wyverns Library... Though Poetry.com may not be the best choice as an outlet for your writing, it is great to hear you're still writing (not to mention where I can go to read some of your work)... Jim
17 Jun 2003:-) Brian 'Dulcet' Bergstrom
Words cannot really explain my feelings on this piece. If you have read my comments on the first part, I mentioned it had become my favorite poem here on Elfwood. I would just like to clarify, after reading this second part, that this "series" or "story" whatever you may call it is my favorite. Like a commenter said earlier, I'm not much for the sappy love poems, no matter how well crafted the are. This poem truly has touched me and inspired me in so many ways. I like the style of rhyming and how you make it all fit together. I could never do a poemna THIS great. My poems are short and meaningless to most. But your poetry, so far, has gotten me thinking on so many ideas for my stories in more ways than one. The settings and telling is just excellent. It's sort of reminds me of how an epilogue would go. A beautiful ending to an epic fantasy. And the people above aren't drunk off their behind (i hate the censors), your stuff truly is spectacular. I will definetly bookmark your library now and check back everyday for updates and new commenters to your stories. This/these poem/poems are definetly works I think the world should read. I read that you made it onto Elfworks with this one?? Great job on that. I'll have to check that out sometime and see what they have to offer me. Though, I doubt my stuff will be let in if I have to compete with prose like THIS! Excellent job on this whole thing. I was reading this on my bed with popcorn and all! Truthfully! It's best to read it quiet. Then you get the real feel for this one. Again (I cannot say it enough) GREAT JOB MAN!!!!!
18 Jun 2003:-) Camilla 'Motone' Whitney
Sigh. How very sobering. Of course it's amazing, how could it be anything short of sheer genius. I think I'll go contemplate in the dark now.
29 Jun 200345 Chandra Shafer
You should write a prequil to Ice Dragon. Because both of these stories are beautifle.
27 Aug 2003:-) Carolin Emily 'Dragoncat' Southern
*Sweeps into the ancient castle, her violet cloak dancing in the frozen December winds, leans over the long-dead maiden, like the long praid for angel, and puts the Ellenshirae, on its golden chain around the maidens neck, then sings an ancient Windsong, and lets the wept for, prayed for and dreamt for miracle take place, then watches her self transform into an old and wisened crone*

Ok ok, I like writing stories too.... I just like being in mine thats all.... Also I felt like cheering up that tragic tale........


Brilliant poem, I can see elven bards singing it as ballad around a warm and blazing campfire in the middle of a dark and foreboading forest, oblivious to the sounds of the forest at the late hour of the ebon night,transfixing their audience, weaving images in their minds.....

*saves poem and adds it to her collection of fantasy writings*
17 Nov 200345 D Joelle Duran
Incredible. You've got undeniable talent with words...the way you described the abandoned keep, and never falter. And that knight's hopeless, endless vigil. The theme reminded me a little of Poe's work, but your word choice is more smooth and beautiful than his would be.
18 Jun 200545 Misti Hope Wudtke
Oh my. Allow me to bow. Truly excellent poem, from a truly excellent poet - a rarety in the 'Wood, I am sad to say. I must explore your other works...
10 Mar 2006:-) Marijke Mahieu
This is stunning! And so sad 8 I just love this poem, well both poems actually, and I think I’ll read them many times more. Just tell me, out of curiousity, how long do you work on a poem like this? Do these words and rhymes all come naturally or do you really search for the right prhases and rhyme words? It really does look like you just wrote it down as it is, perfect in every way! *sigh* This was lovely!
24 Apr 2006:-) Emma-Jane C. Smith
Love this one too! ^_^
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About 'Dragonbane (poem) Part 2':
 • Created by: :-) James K. Bowers
 • Copyright: ©James K. Bowers. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: B620, Ice, Dragon, Tragic, Poem
 • Categories: Dragons, Drakes, Wyverns, etc, Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc.
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