| 18 Apr 2005 | Frances Monro | Loading...OK, I'll bite: How is this about love? James K. Bowers replies: "That's odd... You're the only one to ask, Che... This is not so much about love as it is about a love that destiny demands but can never be... Spend a little more time "reading" what isn't spelled out and you may discover there's more love hidden in this than what initially appears... Jim" | |
| 22 Oct 2005 | Patricia M. D´Angelo | Loading...Such wonderful characterization. Not only did I see Silva, I felt it. This is the level of writing, I think we all aspire to reach. | |
| 11 Feb 2006 | Ramona C. Bogott | Loading...Beautiful! Your word imagery is simply amazing. *big sigh* I have a long ways to go...... Absolutely lovely story, I even smelled the fish. | |
| 17 Mar 2006 | Marijke Mahieu | Loading...Well, I finally read it...and I guess I can now add my praise to that of the others! This was wonderful, Jim. A gripping read from beginning to end. Just one question: is the "voice" outside the tavern one of his regular resident ghosts or is this something/one else? That wasn't clear to me. And Scorpion is definitely no superhero  He's a man of flesh and blood and hormones! He just might be a bit better at hiding his feelings than others, but he's still very REAL...so don't you worry!  | |
| 16 Nov 2006 | Kristie | Loading...Woah SSGT. I Love this one. | |
| 16 Jan 2007 | Heidi Hecht | Loading...Hello. I was sure I'd commented on this before but I guess not. It's a good story. I'd like to see more of these characters. James K. Bowers replies: "Thanx for the visit, Heidi, and for the compliment, as well. For more of the Scorpion, just start with "The Gargoyle's Shadow" and continue in order through "A Soul in the Darkness". The stories appear in the order in which they were written, and in the order they would appear in a published work... Jim" | |
| 28 Jan 2007 | Amber Silver | Loading...You are an amazing writer. I love this story. James K. Bowers replies: "Ah! an unexpected, but much welcomed visitor to my Wyverns page! Thanx for the ego-boost, Amber, & feel free to stop by any time... Jim" | |
| 28 Apr 2007 | Malin M. Larsson | Loading...What kind of troubles you could avoid if you just didn't keep so many secrets and told so many lies... I must say that I prefered the earlier stories, although it's well written it has a cliché feeling over it. I must admit that I wasn't very touched by the end. I don't know what caused that exactly. Perhaps it's just my restless mind that has already read too much of Scorpion - I tire easily. Still, I read it straight through so it isn't that I don't like it - I just know you can do better than this. Malin James K. Bowers replies: " Thank you for the honor of a brief visit, Malin! Well, that's an interesting comment on my one and only Mod's Choice piece, though not very different from my own thinking - I also believe I have writen better, but this tale does lay some necessary groundwork for the following Scorpion Tales. (Perhaps something to keep in mind as you read others in the series is that not everything in a story pertains directly to that story - it may be something that fits with something in an earlier or later piece... Jim" | |
| 6 Dec 2007 | Elizabeth Fitzgerald | Loading...Perhaps it is a little bit of a cliche, but overall I actually have to disagree with Malin. I found it so well written that it just sucked me in until I'd finished. Again, I think it was the human element that did it for me--and I must say I like it even better than "Finishing School".
I liked the way that she knew him so well (although interesting that there didn't seem to be a parallel understanding on his side) and how they both hated their lives for such different reasons.
You've got me very interested to find out more about their past. | |
| 22 Nov 2008 | Patricia M. D´Angelo | Loading...This popped up on the front page, and I enjoyed it so much the first time I had to take a look again. I’ve always found it interesting, how a piece can strike people so differently. This chapter in your tale is one of my all time favorites, and personally I find the writing top notch. | |