| 22 Feb 2002 | Lisa Ann (Jae) Andresen | Loading...you know, i don't like this one as well as the sketch; it's a little too dark. but your description of him at the top makes me want to skedaddle over to your library shelf and take a peek. You have talent! Jenny Olivera replies: "Yes! Go read story! Comment on story! Story is lonely!Anyway, it's supposed to be dark, since it's supposed to be nighttime, and it fits the mood of the story and the character. But yeah, it is quite dark." | |
| 11 Apr 2002 | Dan | Loading...You might try adding a few red hot embers in the cigarett...I know {I've never smoked, just seen people who smoke!} that that only happens when they inhale, but I think it'd add too the mood. Jenny Olivera replies: "Realism... mood... realism... mood... Ah, I think realism wins out this time. Thanks for the suggestion, though." | |
| 21 Oct 2002 | Chris Ellinger | Loading...Isn't this the one from the top of the story? This fits the mood really well - the whole story is kinda half in shadow. Jenny Olivera replies: "That's an interesting way to put it; I never thought of it that way, but the story is kinda "half in shadow," isn't it? This is the full-size version of the pic at the top of Part 1, yes." | |
| 4 Apr 2003 | Black | Loading...I feel like Silver is staring right through me...I love the story and wish you would send it entirely to me...Id love to read it from begning to end...*is mesmerized* oh good lord...what would Red say if he saw me flaunting over another color crew...well not another color crew but someone who could join the crew and he isnt even Real! buh gotta go the Beast is yelling...LOVE IT ALL (thats a major comment coming from someone normally emtionless and detached as Red >_<) Jenny Olivera replies: "Thanks. I hesitate to send it out in file form, though, especially when it's so readily available on the web (in two places, even). You could still read it though begining to "end" there!" | |
| 14 Apr 2004 | Cassandra | Loading...Cigaret is not good! just a joke ! I love so mush is eyes! He look like... really relax. I don't no who is Silver but whit the description, I imagine the personage like that. Jenny Olivera replies: "Well, I don't know if I'd really call him "relaxed," but... calm maybe." | |