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"Head Cold" by Jenny Olivera

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The challenge was to write about somebody in a fantasy world being affected by an illness of some kind. The person who suggested it suggested doing something more severe/rare than the flu or a cold, but I just couldn't resist this.
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"Noxtre ve tuli os siktin..." At least that's what I tried to say. It came out more like "Dogte be duli os sibbin." I cursed my cold and blew my nose for what must have been the tenth time that morning. I needed a new handkerchief. I also needed to lose this cold. This would happen the morning of my wizardry test.

This wouldn't be a problem if I'd taken up sorcery instead. Sorcerers don't have to worry about how they pronounce things. Neither do Witches. I had to take up the one magic art where I have to say the words exactly right or the spell could miscast. I don't even want to think about that.

I tried again: "Dobtre ve duli..."

I groaned and just gave up. Maybe the judges wouldn't mind if I accidently blew up the hall.

I heard someone chuckle behind me and turned to see one of the High Wizards, probably here to escort me to my test. I hadn't even heard her come in. "Bit of a head cold, hm?" she asked. I nodded guiltily and blew my nose. Again. "Well, don't worry about it. We'll just reschedule your test. These things happen after all," she added after seeing my disbelieving (and grateful) look.

"Um," I started before she could leave. "Whad do we do whed id's something we cadd, um, reschedule?"

"You mean, like if you were on the battlefield?" I nodded, and she smiled. "That's why so many of us carry wands and enchanted gems. But if that's not an option, you take the risk of miscasting - or you run. We'll reschedule for next week."

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10 Aug 2001:-) Tom Anspach
LOL. Excellent.
12 Aug 200145 Gregory 'The Jackal' Edwards
A cold might not seem all that 'serious' to some, but when you're casting a spell, and you have to get the words just right, or it'll blow up in your face and send demons to torment your family, it can be a fatal illness! Nice twist.
17 Dec 200145 Claire A. Kempa
Heee... Cute! 2 Pyro that I am, tho, I would've liked it better if something had been set on fire. Rescheduling is so ... simple. I want explosions! BOOM!!!
11 Oct 200245 Chris Ellinger
Heh heh! Good fun! But I will agree and say that some serious comedic value could have been had in the form of explosions or the accidental turning into something else of somebody! Then again, maybe that would have been over done... I dunno. Great work again.

:-) Jenny Olivera replies: "And then he would have failed his test for sure! Would've been funny, though."
26 Apr 2003:-) Kelsie Elizabeth
Heh, I thought this was great. I only wish this was longer 12
9 Dec 2004:-) Richard Aaron Bruns
Good idea, great execution. Well done.

"I groaned and just gave up. Maybe the judges wouldn't mind if I accidently blew up the hall."

I love that paragraph. It captures perfectly the mental processes of someone with a head cold.
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'Head Cold':
 • Created by: :-) Jenny Olivera
 • Copyright: ©Jenny Olivera. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Cold, Flu, Illness, Mage, Magic
 • Categories: Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc.
 • Views: 302

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