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"Everything but love" by Jon ´Lord Fnar´ Stevens

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By popular demand, I am posting more poetry. Visitors to my other site are accustomed to this one, but...
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←- The Death of Retarius | The fighter -→

This is a tale of a king, a king of far and distant lands.

Who holds regent of a small town, across the far and distant sands.

One day, from out of his treasury, he spied a flying dove.

And he knew he had everything.

Everything but love.

One day he met a lady who was all he could ask for.

She was beautiful, intelligent, and helped him out in war.

By some strange twist of horrid fate, she had to move away.

And, of course, as King, this unnamed emporer was forced to stay.

He thought he was forever cursed, and now blamed God above.

For he had felt now everything.

But still he hadn't love.

He was now faced with a choice, for her or for his land.

He was faced with the choice of life, lest all be buried in the sand.

He made the choice to come with her, and give up his palace.

All his gold, his silver, jewels, could not buy love, nor could a chalice.

He now had given up his life, but he thanked god above.

For he'd given up everything.

Everything but love.

 

←- The Death of Retarius | The fighter -→

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13 Apr 200145 Elizabeth (Liz) de Jong
well, it still made me cry. besides, i have an odd sense of what is sad and what isn't...
13 Apr 200145 Jon the writer guy
I really don't think of it as sad, a man giving up material things to be with the one he loves... Hmm, I dont remember what inspired me, really.
13 Apr 200145 Elizabeth (Liz) de Jong
Yes, I remember reading this one on your site, and I remember it made me cry. But don't worry, that's a good thing. It's very touching, and I'll bet something somewhere had inspired you when you wrote it (although it is sad, so maybe it wasn't the best of inspirations)... oh, here I go again. Anyhow, thank you for sharing your beautiful works with us. *inserts her foot into her mouth before it gets crammed in there further, and heads out*
18 Apr 2001:-) W. Irene Thanh
Hmmm, ever read Esther P. Lai's work in Wyvern? Look for her, you've something akin to one of her poems here. I like this. It just made me wonder why I don't do stuff like this...the closest I've gotten to this is the creation myth I made for one of my stories...but it's not published as of yet so don't bother looking for it...hehe
12 Sep 200245 Dunkin Donut
Great poem, yo!
18 Feb 2003:-) Laura Walker
Very beautiful poem. It flows nicely, and I understand what it is saying (A rare thing... I'm usually not one for poetry) I like this though.
28 Oct 200545 Megan
Wow. Very emotional. Beautiful. You are a gifted writer.
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About 'Everything but love':
 • Created by: :-) Jon ´Lord Fnar´ Stevens
 • Copyright: ©Jon ´Lord Fnar´ Stevens. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Poem, Love, King
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