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"Majesty" by Jon Schweer

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A poetic compliment to the story of the white tiger. This is has actually been published in a book of anthologies.

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His Majesty

In the gently falling snow,

he waits patiently.

Like a giant snowball,

drizzled with chocolate syrup.

Feirce but soft blue eyes peirce the still silence

of the night.

Moving as quietly as the falling snow,

only leaving shorwded prints in the white blanket.

Eternally strong, ever vigilant,

Living for the hunt.

He spies the deer;

he rushes, strikes, kills.

Blood stains the virgin snow,

But does not tarnish his coat.

His magesty,

mighty hunter and vigilant warrior;

The Tiger.

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Date	Name	Comment
17 Aug 2001	Christine 'BlackWidow' Landrie	Loading... I've alway like this one, you must have been a big cat in your past life. Jon Schweer replies: "rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr Perhaps. One never knows. Somehow, you cannot help but have a profound respect for such magnificent beings."
25 Nov 2001	Sweet	Loading... Jon... This poem really conveys the magestic qualities tigers and all big cats have.
11 Apr 2002	Dani 'Moonrunner' Hall	Loading... Have you ever felt that some poetry is so overloaded with imagery that you end up swimming in deep metaphors? Yet other poetry is blatantly straightforward. You have hit the happy median in the highway of imagery, my friend. Thanks , I try.
30 Dec 2002	Angela kookybat Rosquin	Loading... purr Good job! ^_^ "Like a giant snowball, drizzled with chocolate syrup" was the best part, but I really liked it all. Keep it up! Yeah that is my favorite pairing myself. Thanks. This is my pride and joy of a poem.

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