| 27 Dec 2003 | Midge | Loading...Wow! Really very well done. As one writer to another, I think that this story is very well written, much better than I could ever do. Congrat's on Mod's choice, and keep writing! | |
| 27 Dec 2003 | D Joelle Duran | Loading...Very fascinating tale. Vividly realized and described. Congrats on Mod's Choice! | |
| 27 Dec 2003 | Vanessa Nunes | Loading... | |
| 28 Dec 2003 | Adam Hunt | Loading...Very interesting. I'll need to bookmark you so I can return later to read more! This is so vivdly described, and the characters are portrayed so well. I'm liking this very much. Later. | |
| 28 Dec 2003 | Nicholas G. DeBruno | Loading...With this story you did an amazing job of showing and telling. I loved how you introduced the story, very original. Throughout the entire peice I could see everything in my mind's eye. Wondeful job, and a mod's choice well deserved! | |
| 28 Dec 2003 | Mosrael | Loading...I really like this. The flow is nice, and the description is superb. There were a few troubles with tense, as well as improper word use, but those aside, this is a gret story | |
| 31 Dec 2003 | Estantia | Loading...Oh wow...amazing. If you don't get a mod's choice on the next chapter, when it comes (hopefully soon), then I will be v.v.v.v.v.v. surprised | |
| 2 Jan 2004 | Sarah 'Mel' Hampton | Loading...Hey!^^ You got Mod's Choice! That's great, you definitely earned it. | |
| 24 Dec 2006 | Val | Loading...Very well written, I can't wait for more!!! | |