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"Taken" by Jorieke ´JoSav´ Savelkouls

SciFi/Fantasy text 11 out of 12 by Jorieke ´JoSav´ Savelkouls. ←Previous - Next→

How a mortal man can fall in love with a creature as mighty and yet fragile as a faerie. Yes yes, Human/Faerie love. Unrequited? Beats me.

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T’is the moment touching me

And the portals to her soul

Darken with an untarnished rage

Serenity of an ocean untamed and free

A blink of lashes swallows me whole

Like a small humming bird locked up in a cage

Grasping such perfection my sole, unimpaired goal

Unequalled beauty setting man and country at wage

When catching a glimpse of such spread out splendour

The Trojan Horse cannot fetter nor deny

And at a vivacious glance one dost surrender

A country, a man, crushed at the blink of an eye

Depraved heart will be her steppingstone of defeat

As a blissful wind touches her smile and carries her voice

Senses entangle when lover’s eyes meet

And the man can see, he hath not a choice.

'Taken' by JoSav 2002

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Date	Name	Comment
23 Jan 2003	Emily Grist	Loading... Whoa... that was just plain awesome!!!! I love the idea... the imagery was... magnificent.... and the words... capturing... oh this was wonderful!!!!!!! I love the ending too.... oh what a sad tale... this could be made into a longer story... will you write one??? Jorieke 'JoSav' Savelkouls replies: "Actually there is a story to it, with some more poems but I'm not sure if I'll ever post it. It's very sad..."
25 Jan 2003	Anneke Hut	Loading... Yeah love is the most powerful weapon! You are my favourite poet Jorieke! Jorieke 'JoSav' Savelkouls replies: "Hehehehee. Thank you Anneke, you are my favorite artist, and commenter. You truly know how to make a person blush, from great art and lovely comments. Thank you."
12 May 2003	Anonymous	Loading... In seattle its not may 12 its may 11! By the way hannah wrote the comment above this! Jorieke 'JoSav' Savelkouls replies: "Well, hon... this is Europe..."
12 May 2003	Anonymous	Loading... can i have a muffin? your writing captures my imagination! You are a great writer. you should publish sometime! if you do get something published post it on your page! by the way you cant be that bad at drawing! oops i am babbling, but can I still have a muffin? Jorieke 'JoSav' Savelkouls replies: "Sure you can! And how about a drink?"
27 Dec 2003	Midge	Loading... I'm wowed again. You are a great writer. Not like you need me to tell you that, but I will anyway. Very nice, beautiful word choice and writing style.
27 Dec 2003	D Joelle Duran	Loading... Beautiful. I really like the rhyme in this one--not forced at all--and your word choice.