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José Manuel López Vega

"Never Shining Stars" by José Manuel López Vega

SF&F Picture 3 out of 12 by José Manuel López Vega
 
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Never Shining Stars

 

Never shinig stars were the memories of yore

Gliding through the halls of this house in decay born

In the vastness of this ocean, in this pit of sad devotion

To a past with no time notion I have seen might fall to naught

I have seen night fall upon this line in glory born.

 

Never shinig stars we are, now all but us is gone

In this house laden with rot, where life crumbles to dust

In this house of boarded windows and armor suits of rust

In the halls abandoned where we waltz with gloomy abandon

In this house of strife where we live beyond your life.

 

Never shining stars is all we are

We dwell in hearts of those still living

In hearts overflowing with sad feelings

Hark the chilling tones of our singing

Willing we are of horror giving. In gay mood we spin that loom

In this house of fay gloom, all things are fay, doomed.

 

Never shinig stars we taste the fruits of death

Your mind we shall drive free of health

Your fear shall inspire our true mettle

Your presence here drives us to nettle

From shadows we leer till all is settled

 

Never shinig stars to everlast

In present to future and from the opast

The spell of terror we ever cast

We are the sails and this house our mast

Forever shall we be Never Shinig Stars.

 

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13 Jul 2003:-) Kimberley Wolfe
I LOVE YOUR WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Its just soooooo nice!!!!!

PS: By the way...... thank for the nice comments you did about my work! I realy appreciate it!!!!

1 José Manuel López Vega replies: "jaja anytime. thamks for liking my weird ghost poem."
30 Aug 200345 AJ Williams
Hey thanks for the comments. I like how you repeated 'never shining stars', and I like how you made references to other other things- "We are the sails and the ship our mast" I thought that was really cool.

13 José Manuel López Vega replies: "Thanks man. I also like the repeating thing, i sort of think it adds to the desperation or something."
4 Sep 2003:-) Beth 'The Wren' Sanger
Thank you for commenting on my gallery, this is really good, kind of remins me of my mum somehow, anyway, you're very good and from one writer to another I wish you every success, good luck!

11 José Manuel López Vega replies: "Hey no prob I reallly think your stories are great annd thanks for commenting on mine!"
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About 'Never Shining Stars':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) José Manuel López Vega
 • Copyright: ©José Manuel López Vega. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Haunted, House, Ghosts, Spirits
 • Categories: Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic, Ghosts, Ghouls, Aparitions
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