|13 Mar 2001|| Michelle A. Whitham|
I really like this one because it draws people to it. Very emotional. I don't know why anyone has commented on this one. I think it's more of vampiric. Lust of life but the haunting pain of their victims comes back. Well done.
|3 Oct 2001|| Melinda <JCFreakForever@msn...com&g|
another good one Josh
|9 Oct 2001|| Anonymous|
Very, very good Josh. Are you a vampire?
|23 Aug 2002|| Joe|
I don't think it's very good. Amateurish at best. It's obviously about a girl he liked that didn't like him. It's just the usual woe is me "poem" that too many people mistake for poetry these days. Lord knows I did for far too many years. I wrote hundreds of pages of that crap!
I feel like Simon on that American All-Stars singing show. I'll give it to you straight, cause I want you to produce quality. If you don't, I won't hold back on my criticism. Of course, I don't have anything up on this site yet, so I suppose I don't really have much of a right to criticize, eh?
|26 Jan 2006|| JoselitosAngel|
Very compelling. A very strange draw to it... I Love it!