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"Heart´s Blood" by Joshua Young

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Like I said, I've been known to write poetry... This particular piece is either about girls or vampires. Or both. Take your pick. It may work its way into one of my novels.
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Heart's Blood

by Joshua Young

That fleeting glimpse,
Oh so tempting.
Why is it so?
How many times?
How often am I to suffer?

Tired, I am worn.
Emotionally dead,
I am comforted yet.
Of my heart and soul I gave.
And recieved naught in return.

The force of you drains me.
Caught in what you are,
I am unable to escape.
Bliss and pain mingle,
Fraught with frustration.

I want to be left to myself,
But cannot bring myself to let the pain go.
I revel in the hurt,
For it brings memories of what was,
Thoughts of what will not be.


by Joshua Young. Copyright Nov 2000. All Rights Reserved.

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13 Mar 200145 Michelle A. Whitham
I really like this one because it draws people to it. Very emotional. I don't know why anyone has commented on this one. I think it's more of vampiric. Lust of life but the haunting pain of their victims comes back. Well done.
3 Oct 200145 Melinda <JCFreakForever@msn...com&g
another good one Josh
9 Oct 200145 Anonymous
Very, very good Josh. Are you a vampire?
23 Aug 200245 Joe
I don't think it's very good. Amateurish at best. It's obviously about a girl he liked that didn't like him. It's just the usual woe is me "poem" that too many people mistake for poetry these days. Lord knows I did for far too many years. I wrote hundreds of pages of that crap!

I feel like Simon on that American All-Stars singing show. I'll give it to you straight, cause I want you to produce quality. If you don't, I won't hold back on my criticism. Of course, I don't have anything up on this site yet, so I suppose I don't really have much of a right to criticize, eh? 2
26 Jan 200645 JoselitosAngel
Very compelling. A very strange draw to it... I Love it!
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