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Joeri ´Jos´ verheyden

"Departing souls" by Joeri ´Jos´ verheyden

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a little sory of a warrior who leaves for a war, hoping that his love should never have to see the pain of death knowing that he probably won't come back, they say farewell in the way there soul tells them
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there you are...
standing on the highest cliff on shore
a true specimen of magic
clothed in a white, silk dress,
a tear rolls of your cheek
a tear... wich sparkles brighter then the mightiest christal
            waving towards the departing ship...

there I am...
standing at stern of the ship
a warrior going to battle
clothed in a shining, mithril armor
a tear rolls of my eye
a tear... almost as beautifull as yours
            stretching my hand, trying to reach you...

there we are...
so far away
yet in soul, forever together
both bearing the symbol of our love for eachother
a tear rolls of our eyes
a tear... saying farewell

there you are...
knowing that I won't come back...
won't come back from that battle
that you'll never see me again

there I am...
knowing that I won't come back
won't come back from that battle
that I'll never see you again

there we are
knowing that we are bound
bound by our hearts and souls
that by heart and soul... we will be together...

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3 Nov 2005:-) Nicolei Arnold
I like the style of this piece. It's really sad, I wrote a story about the sea too. And how it swallows up love. I liked this. A few spelling errors, but I don't care about spelling. Maybe if you fix it up you could make Mod's Choice???
I like it all the same though. Nice job!

:-) Joeri 'Jos' verheyden replies: "thank you, but i think i'll leave the spellingerrors for what they are... (i'm to lazy to change it)i have no need to get it up with the mods choice.it's just a small poem i didn't mind showing to everyone..."
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'Departing souls':
 • Created by: :-) Joeri ´Jos´ verheyden
 • Copyright: ©Joeri ´Jos´ verheyden. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Love, Separation, Soul, Warrior
 • Categories: Fights, Duels, Battles, Romance, Emotion, Love, Warrior, Fighter, Mercenary, Knights, Paladins, Celtic
 • Views: 489

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